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近十年(2021--2012)高考英语书面表达满分范文(一)书面表达【2021年】(2021年新高考I卷)你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.读报的经历;2.喜爱的栏目;3.期望和祝福。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。YouthandMe________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】YouthandMeIthasbeen10yearssinceYouthwasfounded.Inmymemory,itisYouththataccompaniesmethroughmywholehighschool.Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.Besides,IevensubmittedmyownfictiontoYouth.RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.IdoexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture【解析】本文是一篇应用文,向校刊Youth表达自己的经历,并送上自己的祝福。1.词汇积累建立:found→establish沮丧的:upset→depressed得到:receive→obtain赏析:enjoy→appreciate2.句式拓展同义句改写原句:Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.拓展句:Notonlycanthesestoriesrelievemystress,butalsotheycanbroadenmyhorizon.【点睛】[高分句型1]Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.(运用了as引导的让步状语从句,还运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)(2021年全国甲卷)学科网(北京)股份有限公司
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:1.阐明写信事由;2.征求建议;3.表示感谢。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearChris,WordcamethatourschoolisgoingtoholdaclassmeetingwhosetopicisrelatedtoChinesetraditionalcustoms.BecausethisactivitywillbepresentedontheEnglishwebsite,Isincerelywantyoutooffermesomeadvice.Asfarasweknow,thereisahugeculturaldifferencebetweenChinaandthewesterncountries.Inordertogetmoreclicks,you’dbettertellmewhichChinesecultureyouwesternersprefer.What’smore,ifIwanttodecoratemywebsitewithsomeChineseelements,whatshouldIdo?KnowingyouareinterestedinChina,Idobelieveyoucanhelpmesolvethesepuzzles.Ifpossible,youcanreplytomeassoonaspossible.Iwilltakeyouradviceintoconsideration.Ireallyappreciateyourhelp.Yours,LiHua(2021年全国乙卷)你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以BeSmartOnlineLearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:1.分析优势与不足;2.提出学习建议。注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目和首句已为你写好。【答案】onepossibleversion:BeSmartOnlineLearnersNetworklearninghasincreasinglybecomeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeandsolveproblems.Butbeingsmartonlinelearnershasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.Besides,wecantaketheinitiativeinourstudybyourselveswithouttimeandspacelimit.学科网(北京)股份有限公司
Ofcourse,thesedisadvantagesareasfollows.FacedwithallkindsofinformationontheInternet,wecan’ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以BeSmartOnlineLearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。1.词汇积累充分利用:makefulluseof→makethemostof扩宽,丰富:broaden→enrich各种各样:allkindsof→varietiesof不完美:imperfection→defect2.句式拓展合并简单句原句:Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.拓展句:Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantages,findingaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【点睛】[高分句型1]FacedwithallkindsofinformationontheInternet,wecan’ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.(非谓语作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.(现在分词作状语)(2021年天津卷)假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括:(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJin______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________学科网(北京)股份有限公司
【答案】ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJinSichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationProject.JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.What’smore,walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalslikegiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.Therearealsomanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.However,itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbythebeautifulsceneryinJiuzhaigouaswellastheconstructionDujiangyanIrrigationProject.【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿,介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。【解析】第一步:审题体裁:说明文时态:一般现在时结构:总分法第一段是文章的总起段,说明四川省有很多著名的景点;第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程,第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。要求:1.说明四川省有很多著名的景点①四川的地理位置:中国西南部②著名景点:九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程2.介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程①九寨沟是自然保护区②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊,有很多珍稀动植物③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前,现在仍然起着灌溉的作用3.你对该地方的印象和感受:九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹第二步:列提纲(重点词组)belocatedin;world-famous;placesofinterest;anaturereserve;impressive;multi-levelwaterfalls;haveachancetodo…;rareanimals;scenicspot;datefrom;playanimportantpartin;beamazedby第三步:连词成句(1)SichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.(2)Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationProject.(3)JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.(4)Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.学科网(北京)股份有限公司
(5)Walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalssuchasgiantpandasandgoldenmonkeys.(6)Therearemanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.(7)AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.(8)Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.(9)Itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.(10)I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbyitsconstruction.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇1.表递进关系:whatismore2.表转折关系:however3.表示列举:suchas,like【点睛】[高分句型1]Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.(what引导的主语从句)[高分句型2]Walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalssuchasgiantpandasandgoldenmonkeys.(现在分词作状语)(2021年1月浙江卷)假定你是李华,下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿,内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.介绍活动安排;3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【答案】Distinguishedguests,Onbehalfofourschool,Iwouldliketoconveymysincerewelcomeforyourvisiting.Atfirst,itisofsignificancetofullyunderstandtheschool.Asscheduled,allofyouwillvisitthemuseum,whichcontainsthesplendidhistoryofourschool.Furthermore,ourclassesareworthyofbeingattended,becauseyoucanappreciatethedifferencesbetweenChineseandwesternteachingmethods.Afterthat,itisatcanteenthatyoucanhaveaspeciallunchwithourstudents.Asmentionedabove,Iextremelyexpectyourcoming.Mayyouhaveanunforgettableexperience.【分析】本文是一篇应用文,要求考生写一篇发言稿,向即将到校的新西兰学生致欢迎辞。【解析】学科网(北京)股份有限公司
第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构:总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求:1.表示欢迎;2.介绍活动安排;3.表达祝愿。第二步:列提纲(重点词组)onbehalfof;wouldliketo;convey;sincerewelcome;beofsignificance;splendid;beworthyof;appreciate;teachingmethods;canteen;extremelyexpect;unforgettable第三步:连词成句1.Onbehalfofourschool,Iwouldliketoconveymysincerewelcomeforyourvisiting.2.Atfirst,itisofsignificancetofullyunderstandtheschool.3.Asscheduled,allofyouwillvisitthemuseum,whichcontainsthesplendidhistoryofourschool.4.Furthermore,ourclassesareworthyofbeingattended,becauseyoucanappreciatethedifferencesbetweenChineseandwesternteachingmethods.5.Afterthat,itisatcanteenthatyoucanhaveaspeciallunchwithourstudents.6.Asmentionedabove,Iextremelyexpectyourcoming.7.Mayyouhaveanunforgettableexperience.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)1.表文章结构顺序:atfirst2.表并列补充关系:Furthermore连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1]Asscheduled,allofyouwillvisitthemuseum,whichcontainsthesplendidhistoryofourschool.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Afterthat,itisatcanteenthatyoucanhaveaspeciallunchwithourstudents.(运用了强调句型)学科网(北京)股份有限公司