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近十年（2021--2012）高考英语书面表达满分范文（三）书面表达（2020·山东卷）假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员:2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:3.活动反响。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ACross-CountryRunningRace________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ACross-CountryRunningRaceLastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthecompetition.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessarilyhelpaswellasencouragement.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorecohesive.【解析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。体裁:应用文时态:根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主结构:总分总要求:1.参加人员2.跑步路线3.活动反响第二步:列提纲(重点词组)attend/witness/drawone’sattention/managetodosth./measure/speakhighlyof/providesth.forsb.第三步:连词成句学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.2.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthecompetition.3.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.4.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessaryhelpaswellasencouragement.5.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.6.Theactivityishighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydoesitprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomakesusmorecohesive.第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…状语从句连词:because/if/though/although…定语从句连词:which/that/when/where…第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)（2020·天津卷）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像)；(2)对活动的感受；(3)对自己未来的展望。注意:(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇:成人礼thecoming-of-ageceremony新冠肺炎COVID-19DearChris,I’msogladtohearfromyou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiJin【答案】DearChris,Iamsogladtohearfromyou.Thecoming-of-ageceremonywasheldinourschoolonJune8ththismonth.Duringthecoming-of-ageceremony,theheadmastercongratulatedusonsteppingintotheadultworld,reviewingthegrowthperiodthatwehadexperienced.Afterthat,weallwatchedthevideoofalumnifightingagainsttheepidemic.学科网（北京）股份有限公司 Throughtheactivity,whatIfeltisthatIamabletoshouldertheresponsibilityandmakeusstrongerandmoredetermined.Whenfacedwithdifficultiesandfailures,Imustovercomethem.Inthefuture,Iwillbeagooddoctortohealthewoundedandrescuethedying,devotingmyselftomywork.Bestwishes！Yours,LiJin【解析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6月8号举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)2.对活动的感受。3.对自己未来的展望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落、次要段落、段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)。第二段:对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段，表达期望。第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:congratulatesbonsth.,befacedwith,healthewoundedandrescuethedying,devoteoneselftodoingsth.；第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语Duringthecoming-of-ageceremony,theheadmastercongratulatedusonsteppingintotheadult,reviewingthegrowthperiodthatwehadexperienced.that引导的表语从句Throughtheactivity,whatIfeltisthatIamabletoshouldertheresponsibilityandmakeusstrongerandmoredetermined.时间状语从句的省略句Whenfacedwithdifficultiesandfailures,Imustovercomethem.第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:Afterthat,besides,however.第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。7.（2020·浙江卷）假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:1.询问近况；2.分享班级最新消息；3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearPeter,Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavegonebackhomeonsickleave.Howareyoufeelingnow?Ihopemygoodnewsforyouwillsweepawaytheshadowofdisease.Lastmonth,anEnglishfestivalwasheldinourschool,andourclassperformedasongwhichyoutaughtusatthefestival.Assoonaswefinishedthesong,alltheaudiencegaveuswarmapplause.Ifonlyyouhadbeenthere.Weallmissyouverymuchandwishyouaquickandcompleterecovery.学科网（北京）股份有限公司 Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向因生病回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和表达祝愿。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。结构：三段式结构。第一段询问近况；第二段告知班级消息；第三段表达祝愿。要求：1.询问近况（Howareyoufeelingnow?）2.告知班级消息（mygoodnews;performedasongwhichyoutaughtus）3.表达祝愿（wishyouaquickandcompleterecovery）第二步:列提纲（重点词组）besorrytodo;onsickleave;sweepaway;assoonas;givesb.warmapplause;recovery第三步：连词成句1.Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavegonebackhomeonsickleave.2.Ihopemygoodnewsforyouwillsweepawaytheshadowofdisease.3.Assoonaswefinishedthesong,alltheaudiencegaveuswarmapplause.4.Weallmissyouverymuchandwishyouaquickandcompleterecovery.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【2019年】(2019·全国卷I)假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.个人优势；3.能做的事情。注意:：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________学科网（北京）股份有限公司 Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。1.审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在式。2.谋篇布局书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。3.关键词根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有：volunteer，aChinesePaintingExhibition，localcity，advantages，agoodcommandof，beneficialfor，familiaritywith，appreciate，takemyapplicationintoconsideration。通过词汇铺垫，我们就能很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如Firstofall,Besides,tobeginwith，moreover，asforme，Lastbutnotleast等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。【范文】Dearsirormadam,IamaChinesestudentnamedLiHua,whoisstudyinginLondonduringthesummervacation.KnowingthatthelocalartgallerywillholdanexhibitionofChinesepaintings,Iamwritingtoapplyforvolunteering.AsastudentwhohaslearnedChinesepaintingsince5yearsold,IamverypleasedtohaveanopportunitytointroduceChinesepaintingstoforeigners.Besides,myfluentspokenEnglishandrichknowledgeaboutChinesepaintingswillhelpvisitorsunderstandthemeaningbehindeachpaintingdeeply.IwillappreciateitifIcouldbegiventheopportunity.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua.(2019·全国卷II)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括:1.比赛信息；2.赛前准备；3.表达期待。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearChris,I’mwritingtoletyouknowthatwewillhaveavolleyballmatchnextmonth.ThematchwilltakeplaceinourschoolgymontheafternoonofJuly4th.WewillplayagainsttheteamfromHongXingHighSchool.Inordertowinthematch,weshouldgetfullypreparedandpracticehard.Sofromtomorrow,weneedtotrainfortwohoursafterschooleveryday.Pleasecometotheschoolgymat6:30pmfromMondaytoFriday.You’reanexcellentplayer.Withyouontheteam,weareconfidentthatwecanwinthegame.Let’stryhardtogether!Cheers,LiHua【解析】今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁，仍旧是应用文。本次书面表达要求考生写一封邮件告知队友有关比赛的信息。本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的；然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项，注意事件信息的三要素：时间、地点、人物，要交代清楚；第三则要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。(2019·全国卷III)假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括:1.时间；2.活动安排；3.欢迎他表演节目。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】DearAllen,学科网（北京）股份有限公司 Howiseverythinggoing?OurschoolwillholdamusicfestivalnextSundaymorningintheschoolhall.AndI’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus.Theopeningceremonywillstartat9:00am,andtheschoolmasterwilldeliveraspeech.Thentherewillbevariousfantasticperformancesplayedbytalentedstudents.Youaredefinitelywelcometoshowuponstage,whichwilladdcolorandfuntoourfestival.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishes,LiHua【解析】今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：Howiseverythinggoing?amusicfestival，intheschoolhall，Theopeningceremony等。第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。学科网（北京）股份有限公司