四六级谚语式作文 13页

谚语式作文开头段的写法偏褒的引言：第一句：引出话题第二句：带出谚语第三句：全文中心第一句：引出话题引出话题，就是围绕题目中的核心名词写出一个较笼统的句子来引起全文。Itisatruthuniversallyacknowledgedthat核心名词isaadv.+adj.+n.in某方面/playsa***rolein某方面。Inthisconstantlychangingworld,howto____hasintriguednumerousmodernpeople.EgDirections:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayonhappinessbyreferringtothesaying“Happinessisnottheabsenceofproblems,buttheabilitytodealwiththem.”Youcanciteexamplestoillustrateyourpointandthenexplainhowyoucandevelopyourabilitytodealwithproblemsandbehappy.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.Itisatruthuniversallyacknowledgedthathappinessistheultimatepursuitofmodernpeople.Inthisconstantlychangingworld,howtoachievehappinesshasintriguednumerousmodernpeople.Happinessisanextremelycomplicatedandmulti-dimensionaldefinition,whichhasbeenpuzzlingandobsessingthewholehumanityforcenturies.这样的句子你写不出啊童鞋！第二句话：引用谚语。Asawell-knownsayinggoes,“原话.”13 第三句，全文的中心——引言的意义是：Apparently,itsubtlydemonstratesthatinorderto….,weneedto/aresupposedto/oughtto…(中心的提炼和改写）Conspicuously,itaimstoconveyamessagethatweoughtto/haveto/needto…..sothat+好的结果。Apparently,itsubtlydemonstratesthatinordertogetclosetohappiness,weneedtoobtainvariousabilitiesthroughconqueringdiverseproblemsinourlife.Conspicuously,itaimstoconveyamessagethatweoughtnottobeafraidoftheproblemsinourlifesothatweareabletoobtaintheabilitytogetclosetohappiness.Eg2014.6.Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteanessayexplainingwhyitisunwisetoputalleggsinonebaskets.Youcangiveexplanationstoillustrateyourpoint.ItisatruthuniversallyacknowledgedthatweneedtohaveaplanBwhenwearedoingsignificantthings.Asafamousproverbsgoes,“Itisunwisetoputallyoureggsinonebasket.”Thissayingobviouslyaimstodeliverthemessagethatinordertoavoidpossiblefailuresandsetbacks,weoughttomakeadequateandflexiblepreparations.第一句提出问题句型（独立主格）Withoursociety/theInternet（等名词）becoming___，theissueof____hasarousedseriousconcernsofthepublic.EgWriteanessaycommentingontheremark“Earthprovidesenoughtosatisfyeveryman’sneed,butnoteveryman’sgreed.”13 Withnaturalresourcesbecominglessandlessatanalarmingrate,theissueoftheover-useofthesevaluabletreasurehasarousedseriousconcernsofthepublic.EgForthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledManandComputerbycommentingonthesaying,“Therealdangerisnotthatthecomputerisnotthatthecomputerwillbegintothinklikeman,butthatmanwillbegintothinklikethecomputer.”WiththeInternetandcomputersbecomingall-pervasiveineverycornersofourlife,thedangersandharmbroughtbythemhavearousedseriousconcernsofthepublic.第二句一样，引用谚语。第三句：全文的中心——引言的目的是：Apparently,itsubtlydemonstratesthatthenature/ourworld/ourrelationwill+变坏ifwedonotchangethewaywe……Conspicuously,itaimstowarnusofthepossibilitythatunlesswecorrectourattitudetowards…/thewaywe….,wewillnotbeabletosurvivethepunishmentfrom…/achieveourdesiredgoalof….Apparently,itsubtlydemonstratesthatthefakeinformationon-linewilldestroythestabilityandharmonyofoursocietyifwedonotstopthinkinglikecomputers.…inordertoavoidfurtherproblemscausedbythefakeinformationon-line,weoughttobesmarterratherthanstupidlikecomputers.EgWriteanessaycommentingontheremark“Earthprovidesenoughtosatisfyeveryman’sneed,butnoteveryman’sgreed.”13 Withnaturalresourcesbecominglessandlessatanalarmingrate,theissueoftheover-useofthesevaluabletreasurehasarousedseriousconcernsofthepublic.Asawell-knownsayinggoes,“Earthprovidesenoughtosatisfyeveryman’sneed,butnoteveryman’sgreed.”Apparently,itsubtlydemonstratesthatthenaturewillpunishusseverelyifwedonotchangethewaywehavebeentreatingit.图画作文：三段1.描述图画2.说主旨的原因分析＋例子3.重述主旨/解决方案第一段：描述图画三句话第一句：如图所示+图中的场景、大体事件第二句：具体对话内容／动作／细节第三句：全文的中心：图画的目的（根据褒贬）。Asisdepicted／revealedinthecartoon,+主体在干嘛(现在进行时为主）（+时间、地点，若有的话）Asisdepictedgraphicallyinthecartoon,ayoungmanisattendingajobinterview./ajobintervieweristalkingtooneoftheapplicants.13 Asisgraphicallydepictedinthecartoon,astudentisaskingacollegestaffwhetherhecanfindashortcuttostudy.Asisgraphicallydepictedinthecartoon,ateacherisaskingoneofherstudentstoansweraneasymathquestion.第二句：具体对话内容or动作基础弱保底形：Aasks/says:“。。。”Then,Breplies：“。。。”Adoubts：“。。。”Then,Bseems***/does***。可以照搬图中对话原文或略做改动。要分清是谁问、是谁答Thestudentsays,“Iamgoingtoneedtechsupport.”Theinterviewersays,“Sorry…..”.Thestaffsays,“…..”13 进阶版：用间接引语,加点修饰Thestudentcouldnotanswerthequestionandsaysthatheisgoingtoneedtechsupport.TheinterviewerindirectlydeclinesapplicationoftheyoungmanbytellinghimthecruelfactthatalltheotherapplicantsarePh.D’s.Thestaffanswershisquestionbytellinghimthatwhatheislookingfordoesnotexistintheactualworld.高手版：加动作细节用说话者的动作作为状语开头（注意主动还是被动）加他说的话（可以直接可以间接）加脑部没说话的人的反应。Lookingattheblackboard,thestudentsays,“Iamgoingtoneedtechsupport.”Then,theteacherseemsratherembarrassed.Lookingattheresumeoftheapplicant,theinterviewersays,“Sorry…..”.Then,theyoungmanlooksratherfrustrated.Pointingtoherleftside,thestafftellsthestudentthatwhatheisseekingisnowheretobefound.Then,thestudentseemsratherdisappointed.第三句话中心其实就把引言式作文的“这句话的目的”改成“这幅图的目的”即可。文章想要呼吁的事情（褒）or我们忽略了的重要事情／一件坏事Apparently,thecartoonistaimstodeliverthemessasgethat+题目拓展成一句话Obviously，thecartooinaimstodeliverthemessagethatourabilitytosolvethebasicproblemwilldiminishanddisappearifweputtoomuchrelianceonthemoderntechnology.…themoderntechnologyplaysanincreasinglynegativeroleinourdailylife.13 Obviously，thecartooinaimstodeliverthemessagethatwecannotacquiretrueandpracticalknowledgeifwearealllookingforshortcutstolearning.Asisdepictedgraphicallyinthecartoon,ayoungmanisattendingajobinterview.TheinterviewerindirectlydeclineshisapplicationbytellinghimthecruelfactthatalltheotherapplicantsarePh.D’s.Apparently,thecartoonaimstodeliverthemessagethatthedegreeshouldnotbetheonlystandardinthejobmarket.第二段：原因分析型第一句：中心句第二句：分论点一（原因一＋展开）第三句：分论点二（原因二＋展开）第四句：分论点三（原因三＋展开or举个例子）如何想出原因？中文思路都没有！从物质到精神从个人到社会从施力者到受力者从内部到外部思考：为什么追星越来越疯狂？为什么要来上直播课？追星：1.家长变富，孩子有钱；（施力，物质）2.家长变忙，纵容孩子；（施力，外部）13 3.孩子孤单，需要寄托；（施力，精神）4.明星才华颜值高；（受力，精神）5.社会和媒体的渲染；（社会，外部）为什么上网课？1.有钱；（施力，物质）2.英语一般，需要提升；（施力，精神）3.家长支持；（施力，外部）4.学校、社会、工作要求；（外部，精神）5.大王吸引你，天天诱惑你；（受力，精神）原因型中心句（死背即可）a.Thereareseveralpossiblereasonsaccountableforthisphenomenon/statement.有一些可能的原因可以解释这个现象／说法。b.Thereasonswhy(Irecommendthisbookmost)／(ofthiscaraccident)areasfollows.（我最推荐这本书的/这起车祸的）原因如下。如果题目中有“whether”，第二段的中心句则是你给出的选择，后面再解释你的选择。Literally,thereisnosuchthingas“shortcut”ifyoutrulyresolvetolearnknowledgeandmakesomeachievementsinthefieldofyourmajor.13 Infact,shortcutstolearningarejustafairytale.基本句型思路1.事实/推理。Therefore，分结论。2.分结论because原因3.Inorderto+目的，我们应该4.If假设，will该假设的结果做一件事情的目的，和期待，其实就是做这件事的原因。Smileistheshortestdistancebetweenpeople.1.Smilecanmakeapersonlookwarm,easy-going,andagreeable;therefore,peoplealwayslikemakingfriendswithpeoplewhooftensmile.2.Peoplealways…..,becausesmilecan…..3.Ifyouwantpeopletomakefriendswithyou,you’dbettersmilemoreandletsmilesmakeyoulookwarm,easygoing,andagreeable.4.Inordertolookwarm,easy-going,andagreeableandattractmorepeopletomakefriendswithyou,youaresupposedtosmilemore.你想出各种原因，然后把它们写成先因后果、先果后因、目的、条件句。例子的写法a.事实例子（可以编造）b.假设的例子事实例子：我的弟弟原来是个品学兼优的学生。后来迷上了EXO,开始染头发，逃课；后来偷了家里的钱去韩国看演唱会，去追车的时候出了车祸。假设例子：如果你对一个明星过度痴迷，那么会耽误你学习的时间，影响你和身边朋友的交往，和引起一系列不好的结果。13 事实例子的写法，三句话。第一句，人、物的原状。第二句，主题下的发展。第三句，人、物的结局。（和原状要强对比）第一二句一般都是过去时态，第三句可能过去，可能完成，可能现在。Forinstance,myyoungerbrotherusedtobeanambitiousboyandbehavedwellatschool.Notlongago,hebecameacrazyfanofEXO,akoreanstarsteam.Then,hetotallychangedintoanotherperson.Hemadehishairstrangeandcolorful,andonedayhestolethemoneyfromhisparentsjusttoseetheEXO’sconcertinKorean.Unfortunately,hewashitbyacarwhenhewaschasingthecarofhisidols.假设例子的写法1.条件状语从句If按照文章的主题，will产生什么样的结果Ifyouworshipyouridolcrazily,youwillsurelywastealotoftimewhichshouldbespentinstudyoncollectingalltheinformationrelatedtohim,andyouwillspendalotofmoneyonbuyinganythingrelevanttohim.Then,yourstudy,yourrelationshipwithyourfriendsandclassmates,evenyourhealthwillbeseriouslyaffected.2.假设法a.提出按照主题条件下的一个假设情境b.设问：“你会怎么做？”c.给出常理性的做法。Suppose,….whatwillyouprobablydo?Mostpeoplewillsurely…..,which…..13 Supposeyouareafreshmanincollegeforthefirstday.Youenterthedormassignedtoyouandthreeofyourroommatesarealreadythere.Oneofthemisplayingwithhismobilephone,onegivesyouaglimpseandthencontinuestodohisownstuff,andonelooksatyouwithawelcomingsmileonhisface,whichonewillyoutalkwithfirst?Theanswerisobvious,andthatisthepowerofsmiles,whichcanalwaysbringpeoplecloser.第二段让你写方式：中心句＋两方式＋已经实施方式的例子中心句Thereareseveralpossibleways/solutionsforustoputanendto…/preventthistrendfromworsening.Theapproachestosth./waysofhowto…areasfollows.其实写建议也要用原因扩展！建议一because这样做的好处另外一个好处.Therefore,我们可以采纳建议二Inorderto解决问题，我们还可以有建议三。比如，有一个东西原来很差。后来采纳了建议n,然后，就变好了。第二段的核心就是原因加举例！就算是what、结果，也是去说它们的原因。Thequalitiesforwhichajobintervieweroughttolookareasfollows.Tobeginwith,thewayajobapplicanttalksandisdressedisofgreatimportance,becausewhatapersonwearsandsayscompletelyreflectswhetherheistrulyeducatedorhehasjustobtainednothingbutadegree.13 Whatismore,thejobinterviewersshouldpaymoreattentiontotheperformaceofapplicantsintheinterviewratherthanthedegree.Therefore,theycanchoosetalentedstaffwhohavepotentialsandskillsratherthanaresomeexammachinesandbooknerds.SupposeyouareaHRmanagerandyouareinterviewingtwoapplicants.Oneofthemownsadoctor’sdegreebuthebarelyknowsanythingaboutyourcompanyandstutterswhenaskedwithquestions;however,anothernewly-graduatedbachelorhasdonethoroughpreparationandanswerseveryquestionyouaskwithconfidenceandaccuracy,whichonewillyouchoose?Theanswerisquiteobvious.结尾段方案一：根据题目的要求来写。（永远第一位的，但是明确要求的很少）Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayonhappinessbyreferringtothesaying“Happinessisnottheabsenceofproblems,buttheabilitytodealwiththem.”Youcanciteexamplestoillustrateyourpointandthenexplainhowyoucandevelopyourabilitytodealwithproblemsandbehappy.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.方案二：偏褒/偏贬的文章总结主题是褒还是贬+两个原因+展望未来主题，tosumup,isadv.+adj.Notonlydoesit….,butB…….Ihopethatwecan….sothat..will好的结果Smile,tosumup,isabsolutelypowerful.Notonlydoesitmakeeverydaypleasant,butwemakemorefriendsforthesakeofit.Ihopethateveryonecouldsmileasmuchastheycansothattheworldwillbecomeamorebeautifulplace.Puttingalleggsinonebasket,tosumup,isabsolutelyunnecessary.Notonlydoesitaddtothe13 costofpossiblefailures,butpeoplemaylosetheirconfidenceandcouragebecauseoftheunaffordableconsequences.Ihopethatpeoplealwayshaveaback-upplanwhendoingimportanttaskssothatthechanceofsuccesswillbehigherandtheriskoffailurewillbelower.方案三：贬义总结现象的危害+提出两解决+展望未来主题，tosumup,is贬义副词+形容词。Inordertoaddressthisproblemthoroughly,/improvethisconditionimmediately,/controlthistrendeffectively,Aissupposedto+措施一。Meanwhile,itisabouttimethatBdid措施二。Onlyinthesewayswill____become更好。Puttingalleggsinonebasket,tosumup,iscompletelyunreasonable.Inordertoreducethecostofpossiblefailures,wearesupposedtohaveaback-upplanwhendoingimportancethings.Meanwhile,itisabouttimethatirrationalpeoplelearnttobemorematureandconsultedtheirmoreexperiencedfriendsaboutsuggestions.Onlyinthesewayswillweaddtothechanceofsuccessandlowerthecostoffailure.13