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谚语警句型作文 2006,6-2011,6综合评述型5利弊型4对比型1（06，12）应用文（演说词）1（07，6） 2011,12Directions:You"reallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying,"Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftime.“You"dwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words。 分析：出题风格出现巨大“颠覆”颠覆一：话题发生大的变化。历年四级作文的话题都是针对某一校园或社会现象进行评述，而此次作文更像是对一句谚语进行评述。颠覆二：题目形式更加复杂。传统的四级议论文出题形式非常简单，就是围绕一个标题写一篇议论文。而此次作文要先点评一句笑话，在此基础之上再来写文章的标题，以至于很多考生在写作时根本都没有提起这句笑话。颠覆三：取消了传统的提纲作文模式。传统的四级议论文都是有两至三条提纲，面对完全无提纲的作文，学生对整篇文章的框架结构不知如何安排。颠覆四：字数有了上额限制。传统的四级作文字数都只有下限——不低于120字。而此次作文字数明确规定在120-180之间，那么不够或超出这个范围之外就会扣除相应的分数。 题材和内容都是相当地令人陌生，两点命题思路：一、2011年6月份网络购物利弊的这篇题目过于简单，常见，容易被押题，因此今年的作文题目当然波动性地出现难度上升；二，反押题精神，今年并没有考到之前的热点，如“酒驾安全问题”、“明星选秀问题”等等。 一、出题风格出现巨大“颠覆”；二、文章主题：人生哲理，励志接近2004、2007考研写作考研真题普及面很广的“个人价值观、人生哲理类话题”：2008年考研写作真题的题目是“合作——人要学会合作共赢”；2007年考研写作真题是“自信——自信很重要”2004年的考研真题写作是“坚持和毅力的重要性”三、出题形式重复1997年1月CET4的“practicemakesperfect”; 谚语警句型作文写作思路一般要求以议论为主体，以例证为手段首段：揭示寓意主体段：（以例证）展开议论结论段：提出劝诫 历届考题97，1:PracticeMakesPerfect1.怎样理解“熟能生巧”2.例如在英语学习中3.又如 历届考题97，1CET6HasteMakesWaste1.为什么“欲速则不达”2.举例说明 历届考题97，1:PracticeMakesPerfect1.怎样理解“熟能生巧”2.例如在英语学习中3.又如 Thereisanoldsayinginchina:practicemakesperfect.Practiceisameansandperfectisagoal.Onlywhenyoudomorepracticecanyoumakethingsperfect.Thisistruenotonlyinourlearningbutalsoinotherwalksoflife. TakethestudyofEnglishforexample.Practiceenablesustospellwordscorrectlyandmastertherulesofgrammarquicklyandpracticealsomakesusbecomefluentinspeakingandwriting.ItisalmostimpossibleforapersontospeakEnglishfluentlyandaccuratelywithoutalotofpractice. Anothercaseinpointiscooking.Agoodcookcanprepareadeliciousmealbutyouwillnotbesurprisedathisperformanceifyouknowhowmuchtimehehasspentpracticing.Throughpractice,hethenbecomesanexpertatcooking. Itgoeswithoutsayingthatpracticemakesperfect.Onlythroughpracticecanonebegoodatdoingthings.Sincewehaverealizedtheimportanceofpractice,whynotputitintopractice? 历届考题97，1CET6HasteMakesWaste1.为什么“欲速则不达”2.举例说明 HasteMakesWaste"Hastemakeswaste"isanEnglishproverbwhichmeansthatoneshoulddoeverythingstepbystep.Evensimpleoperationscaneasilybespoiledifwerushtocompletethem,neglectingimportantstagesintheprocess.Oneshouldmakefullpreparationsbeforebeginningantask. TakeEnglishstudyforexample.Withoutagoodcommandofpronunciation,wecanneverhopetospeakinanunderstandableway.Similarly,ifwedonotlearntospellproperlyandtoacquireabasicgraspofgrammar,wewillneversucceedinwritinggoodcomposition. Inshort,layingasolidfoundationisessentialifwewanttomakeachievementsinourstudiesorwork,orindeedinanyotheraspectofourlives.Ateverystep,reviewwhathasbeenachievedandassesstheproblemsaheadbeforemovingtothenextstep.Andremember,Romewasnotbuiltinaday. 谚语格言题文章逻辑结构：ParagraphI:（1）点明要阐释的谚语或名言(general)；（2）用自己的话解释这一谚语或名言的意思，有时有正反两面的逻辑(specific)。ParagraphII:（1）作者对该谚语或名言的观点态度，即文章的论点句；（2）支持性的细节分论点，举例子论证（至少两点，有时有正反两面的逻辑）；（3）本段总结（可以省略）。ParagraphIII:（1）总结全文，定下结论（通常为阐明其现实或更深远意义）。 历届考题97，1Cet4PracticeMakesPerfect1.怎样理解“熟能生巧”2.例如在英语学习中3.又如97，1CET6HasteMakesWaste1.为什么“欲速则不达”2.举例说明 2011年6月Cet41.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3.我的建议2011年6月CET61.现在许多人热衷于各种证书考试；2.其目的各不相同；3.在我看来。 2010，6Cet4DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2.出现这种情况的原因3.针对这个现象我认为2010，6Cet6DueAttentionShouldBeGivenTotheStudyofChinese1.近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象；2.出现这种现象的原因和后果；3.我认为…… 2011,12CET4Directions:You"reallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying,"Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftime."You"dwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words。2011,12CET6Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTheWaytoSuccessbycommentingonAbrahamLincoln"sfamousremark,"Givemesixhourstochopdownatree,andIwillspend,thefirstfoursharpeningtheaxe."Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.遥相呼应大同小异 12月的四级作文要求写一篇意志和成功的关系的短文。首先，这个题目没有任何题材范围上的突破，和大学生的日常生活和成长有关。第二，这个题目其实很有利于考生的发挥。如何写 2011,12CET4Directions:You"reallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying,"Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftime."You"dwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words。 NothingSucceedswithoutaStrongWillP1.点评谚语+引出话题首先依据背景材料来提出问题，“从戒烟的问题引出做任何事情都需要坚强的意志，需要坚持到底，不可半途而废。”P2.观点+举例分析这一问题，可以正反论证，也可举例成功的实例进行论证，此为主体段落，P3.点题收尾+提出劝诫总结来论证坚强的意志对于成功的重大意义 范文一Thehumoroussayinghassubtlyrevealedthetruththatnothingsucceedswithoutastrongwill.Seeminglyeasyasquittingsmokingis,itrequiresadeterminedmindandastrongwill,thelackofwhichmaygiverisetotheultimatefailure. Undoubtedly,beingdeterminedisthemostimportantqualitythatanyonewhowantstoachievesuccessshouldpossess.AgoodcaseinpointisHelenKellerwhoisafamousnovelist,educatorandphilanthropist.Despiteherparalysis,shehaslearnedaltogetherfivelanguages,namelyEnglish,French,German,LatinandGreek.Apparently,itisstrongwillthatenableshertoovercomeallthedifficultiesandfulfillherambitionseventually.） Tosumup,sincethereisnoroyalroadtosuccess,weshouldalwayspossesstheunyieldingspiritandnevershrinkinfrontofsetbacks.Onlybybuildingastrongwill,canwefindtheeventualpay-offcouldwellbeworthoureffortandembraceabrighterfuture.Justasthesayinggoes,“Whenthegoinggetstough,thetoughgetgoing”（环境越艰困硬汉越吃香）.（172） 2011，12范文二Thereisawidespreadhumoroussayingthat,“Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftimes.”Funnyasitis,thesayingironicallyreflectsthefactthatstrongwillisthemostessentialqualityforanyonewhowantstoachievesuccess. Ourlifeinvolvesallkindsofobstaclesandsetbackswhichmayexhaustusandknockusdown.Therefore,wemusthavestrongwilltomeetthechallengeofthem.What’smore,therearemanytemptationswaitingforuswhenwearestrivingforsuccess.Forexample,whenyouaredoingyourutmosttoquitplayingcomputergames,yourfriendsjustplaywithgreatsatisfaction.Thenhowcanyouresistsuchterribletemptation?Obviously,onlywithstrongwillcanyouconqueryourselfandrealizeyourgoals. Allinall,successonlybelongstothosewhocansufferlongyearsofpatienttoilandconstantefforts,justastheoldpopularsayinggoes,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.” 范文三Sometimes,inourdailylife,theeasiestthingmightbethemostdifficultthing,asinthecaseofsomepeopletryingtoquitsmokingforhundredsoftimesandstillmakingendlesseffortswithoutanyhopeofsuccess.Thereasonfortheirfailureistheirlackofastrongwill。 Inourmodernworld,nothingissimpleandstraightforward.Somethingmightappeardeceptivelyeasyatfirst,butasweproceedon,wewillfindthatitisactuallyextremelydifficult.Therefore,wemusttakewhateverwedoseriouslyandbementallypreparedtomakeourutmostexertions.Whenweencounterobstaclesandsetbacks,wemustapplyourstrongwillpowerandpersevereuntilwefinallysucceed。 Forusuniversitystudents,inouracademicstudiesorinourdailylifeoncampus,wemightnotbefacedwithinsurmountablechallenges.Butweneedtogetprepared,rightnow,totakethingsseriously,trytocultivateourstrongwill,andbereadytopursueourgoalsthroughpersistenceandindefatigable(不屈不挠的)will.Ibelieveit’stheonlywaywecanachieveoursuccess。 虽然这次作文大爆冷门，但也给我们一个新的提示：四级作文的革新之路已经开始了！四级大纲明确规定，要求学生根据规定的题目和所提供的提纲、情景、图片、图表等写一篇不低于120字的短文，在过去近12次考试中，基本上都是“题目+提纲”的组合，那么以后“题目+情景、图片、图表”的形式也要引起大家的关注了！ 典型句式Astheoldsayinggoes,…Examplescanbeeasilyfoundtomakeacaseforthisproverb.Take…forexample/instance.Anothergoodexampleis……isacaseinpoint(…是恰如其分的例子)One（Another）caseinpointis…Anotherillustrationofthisis…sthisbestexemplifiedby…,Toillustrate/demonstrate/Inordertospecifythisstatement,Iwouldliketocitetheexperienceofsbasanexample. AnEnglishproverbsays,Oneofthegreatmenonceremarked,"HasteMakesWaste".Nearlyeverycivilizationhasitsownequivalenttotheproverb:History/Oursociety aboundswiththeexamplesof"HasteMakesWaste".…….Ontheotherhand/Onthecontrary,…….Foruscollegestudents,thesaying/proverbhasaprofoundandrealisticsignificance:……. 模板一Itiswellknowtousthattheproverb:"___谚语_______"hasaprofoundsignificanceandvaluenotonlyinourjobbutalsoinourstudy.Itmeans____谚语的含义_______.Thesayingcanbeillustratedthroughaseriesofexamplesasfollows.(alsotheoretically)Acaseinpointis___例子一______.Therefore,itisgoeswithoutsayingthatitisofgreatofimportancetopracticetheproverb____谚语_____.WiththerapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyinChina,anincreasingnumberofpeoplecometorealizethatitisalsoofpracticalusetosticktothesaying:____谚语_____.Themoreweareawareofthesignificanceofthisfamoussaying,themorebenefitswewillgetinourdailystudyandjob 模板二__________________(所给格言或谚语).Thisisaproverbfulloflogic.Bythisproverb,itismeantthat_________(解释该格言或谚语的内涵).Inotherwords,________________(换言之的解释).Indeed,wecanlearnmanythingsfromit.Examplescaneasilybefoundtomakethispointclearer.____________(例子)isacaseinpoint.Anothercaseistha_________(例子二)Whateveryoudo,pleaserememberthesaying“______________(该格言或谚语).Ifyouunderstanditandapplyittoyourstudyorwork,you’llnecessarilybenefitalotfromit. 模板三Thegoodoldproverb,_______________(所给格言或谚语),remindsusthat__________________(诠释该格言或谚语)。Ontheonehand,______________(详述1).Ontheotherhand,_________________(详述2).Take_____________(某相关事例)forexample,__________________(展开论述).However,itiseasiersaidthandone.Practiceisthemostimportantfactor.Onlywhenyoupayattentiontoitcanyouholditsoonerorlater. HomeworkAFallintothePit,AGaininyourWit1.怎样理解“吃一堑，长一智”2.举例说明SuggestedhomeworkIt’snevertoooldtolearn AFallintothePit,AGaininYourWitSincetoerrishuman,noonecouldseetoitthathedidn‘tevermakeamistake.However,dwellingtoomuchonmistakeisoflessneedthandrawinglessonsandmakinggreaterefforts,whichindeedcountsmoreinpersonaldevelopment. 例证成语蕴意Scanningoverthehumanhistory,wecanfindthatthetruthintheproverbhasbornecountlesstests.Justasanindividualcanimprovehimselfthroughmistakes,sodoesacountry.Inthisaspect,Chinamayserveasagoodcaseinpoint.Tofeedalargepopulation,Chinaonceputtoomuchstressonitseconomicdevelopmentwithoutpayingsufficientattentiontotheconservationofnaturalresources. 例证成语蕴意Asaresult,seriousissuesonenvironmentaldeteriorationemergedinsuccession.Toourrelief,Chinatookimmediateremedialmeasurestoputthematterrightbeforebeingdrivenintotheperil.NowChinahaschanneleditseconomyonthetrackofsustainabledevelopment. 提出劝诫Nowthatthegainsfromthefallsmeanssomuchforhumanbeings,weshoulddevelopagoodattitudetowardfailures.Mostimportantofall,weoughttobearinmindthatitisnoterrorsormistakesbutthelossofconfidenceandcouragethatisreallyterrible.”Amanmaybedestroyed,butnotdefeated.”SodeclaredEarnestHemingway.