广东省天河区高考英语语法二轮复习：短文改错精讲精炼01含答案 6页

短文改错精讲精炼01I.下面短文川有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号【/】，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线【］划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighschool.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollarinmypockets,andsoIthoughtaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferentexperieneeforthreemainreasons:beingmoreresponsible,moredecisiveandmorecreative・BecauseofKmonmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithoutbeingtold・Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheiradvices.Intheotherhand,Icouldmakemyownfutureplan.Ihavemaderulesformetofollow.短文改错ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighschool.Iwasdecidedhavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollarinmypockets,andsoIthoughtgettingdollarsaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick,whenLivingonmyownisatotaldifferentexperieneeforthreemainreasons:beingmoreresponsible,totallymoredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofKmonmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithout beingtoldA.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheiradvices.adviceIntheotherhand,Icouldmakemyownfutureplan.Ihavemaderulesformetofollow.myRosewantedajob・Shewenttomanyofficesandshedidn"tlikeanyofthem.Onedayshesawaboardinanofficeread:,zThisofficeneedsatypistwhomcantype200wordsaminute/Rosewasexciting.WhenRosewenttothemanager"soffice,themanwaswritingsomething・Roseknoekedatthedoorandthemanagerraisedherhead・"Doyouneedatypist?"askedRose・"Yes!〃hesaid・Roseclappedherhand.Shecouldn"thelpsaying,"OK!Howmuchwillyoupayformeeverymonth?"Themanagerthoughtforawhileandsaid,"Iwillpayyou77dollarsforfirstthreemonths・ThenIwillpayyou30dollarseverymonth."Rosesmiledandanswec"Great!Iwillcomeandworkherethreemonthslate/Themanagerwasspeechless.短文改错:Rosewantedajob・Shewenttomanyofficesandshedidn"tlikeanyofthem.butOnedayshesawaboardinanofficeread:"Thisofficeneedsatypistwhomcanwhoreadingtype200wordsaminute•"Rosewasexciting.WhenRosewenttothemanager"soffice,excitedthemanwaswritingsomething・Roseknockedatthedoorandthemanagerraisedherhead・"Doyouneedatypist?"askedRose・"Yes!"hesaid.Roseclappedherhand.hiseverymonth?"ThehandsShecouldn"thelpsaying,"OK!Howmuchwillyoumanagerthoughtforawhileandsaid,"Iwillpayyou77dollarsforAfirstthreethemonths・ThenIwillpayyou30dollarseverymonth."Rosesmiledandanswer,"Great! answeredIwillcomeandworkherethreemonthslate."Themanagerwasspeechless・later3.假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。DearWeiFang,ItsalongtimesinceIheardfromyouinlastlime.Now「dliketotellyouaimpressivestorythathappenedonthefirstdayofmyteachingcareer・Aboy,LiMing,whomfatherdiedamonthago,waslateforschool.Hestoodoutsidetheclassroomsilent・Ismiledtohimandlethimcome.Afterawhile,hebegantocry.Seeingthis,Iwalkedtohimandaskedwhathashappened-Hetoldmehismotherwasillbuthehadtogetsomemedicineforher-Atthesametime,heapologizedtomeforhislateness.Movedbyhisword,IpraisedhimforhisdeedsanddecidedtosingasongwasnamednMother"forthestudents.Fromthenon,Ibegantorealizeweshouldrespectourparentsanddidourbesttohelpthem.Doyouthinkso?lookingforwardtoyourreply.第：後履文改错:共M小赳每小题出分,滴分15分〉j?enrUHikuIlsA心沿limftrinceIheardfromjvu^lastNvwViHk?ta询！y旅匚邑>toknpgBMe»ioryihainappcneeonthefirstdayofmyteachinggear.Aboy.14Mhg,whnaifhiherditxlamonth智岛wuslateforscbnol.Hurzeply.Iwenthikingtoamountainwithmyfriendslastsummer.Itwasgoodtripattebeginningandsomethingunexpectedhappenedhalfway・OneofmyfriendsuddenlyfeltaterriblepaininhisstomachandbecouldrVtmoveanyfar.Nobodyknewwhattodoit・Onegirltriedtocallhermuminhermobilepone,buttherewasnosignalinthemountainarea・Luckywehadbroughtatentwithus.Weputitupandlethimrestedinit.Hetooksomemedicine.Thenhedrinksomewater,andatesomefood・Afterwhile,hefeltmuchbetterandwewalkedon.Weallenjoyedusonthetopofthemountain. )wenthikingtoamtiunlainwithmyfriendsIasisummer,huasagoodtripatthebeginningandbutsomethingunexpectedhappenedhalfwjy.OneofmytricrxisuddenlyfeltaterriblepaininhisfriendsslomachandlieCQulchVtmoveanyfar.NobodyknewwhattodoXDnegirltriedtocal)hermumfirther/Turtherhl^rmobilephone,buitherewaxnosignalinthemountainarea.LuckywehadbroughttentwithcnLuckilyii乩WcputhupandlethimrestedinitIlelooksomemedicine・Thenliedrinksomewater,andatedranksomefood.AHerAwhile,hefeltmuchbetterandwewalkedon