广东省天河区高考英语语法二轮复习：短文改错精讲精炼06含答案 6页

短文改错精讲精炼0624.此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(J);如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/V),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。DearEditor,I"mwritingtotellyouopinionaboutwatersaving.76.Waterisimportant.We,aswellasanimal,cannotlive77.withoutwaterandneitheragricultureorindustrycango78.withoutit.Yetitseemedwaterisbecominglessandless.79.Manycountriesintheworldfindwedon"thaveenoughwater.80.Todealwithaproblem,Ithink,weshouldfirstgoall81.outtoplanttreesthoughtreeswillhelpsavewater.Next,no82.drinkingwatershouldbeleftrunning.Third,weshouldfind83.waystoreusethewaterusinginwashing,especiallybath84.waterforwhichisquitealot,andthatwillsavemuchwater.85・Sincerely,LiHua[解析]DearEditor,I"mwritingtotellyouAopinionaboutwatersaving.76._my_Waterisimportant.We,aswellasanimaLcannotIive77usedwaterfbr[KG3mm]whichisquitealot,andthatwillsavemuchwate匚85.forSincerely,LiHua76.opinion前加mytellsbsth告诉某人某事，题目中直接宾语opinion是作者的看法，故在其前面加myo77.animal—animalsanimal是一个单数可数名词不能单独使用，这里表示类别，用复数。7&or-*nor与前面的neither呼应，构成固定搭配neither*••nor…既不也不。79.seemedseems全篇文章都是以一般现在时为主，再根据后面的is,可知用现在时。80.we—they根据前面的Manycountries可知用they替代这些国家。81.a-*the/this/that这里的problem指缺乏水的情况，因此属于特指。82.though-*because/since/as根据后面的treeswillhelpsavewater是解释种树的原因，所以用because/since/aso83.J84.using-*used根据后面的inwashing可知是洗衣服用过的水，所以用used。85.去掉forwhich指代water,作主语，不需要for。 25.Timeandtidewaitnoman.Mymotherisbecomingamiddle-agewomanquietly.Shehadbeenbusyrunningafterusalltheyears.Myfatherisverybusyeverydayoutside.Buttheheavyburdenfallsonmymother"sshoulder.Becausemyschoolisfarfrommyhome,Ihavetogotoschoolbythetrainandmymotherseesmeoffatthestationeverytime・Ioftenchooseascatwhereisclosetothewindow,soIcanseehe匚However,Ialwayscan"thelpruntearsfrommyeyes・Allthebuildingsandpeopleoutsidethewindowdisappear.IwavegentletomymotherandIlookathertilltheviewofherbackdisappears・Uptonow,evenifheisbusy,shestilldoesitasusual.Theviewofmymother"sbackwillneverchangeinmyheart・［解析］TimeandtidewaitAnoman.Mymotherisbecomingayniddlc-agc.womanquietly,formiddt^gedShehadbeenbusyrunningafterusalltheyears.Myfatherisverybusyeverydayoutside.ButthehasSbheavyburdenfallsonmymother"sshoulder.Becausemyschoolisfarfrommyhome,Ihaveto丿"shoiHdcrs77gotoschoolbythetrainandmymotherseesmeoffatthestationeverytime.Ioftenchooseaseatwhereisclosetothewindow,soIcanseeher.whicH-thatHowever,Ialwayscan"thelpmntearsfrommyeyes.Allthebuildingsandpeopleoutsiderunningthewindowdisappear.Iwavegcntlgc&］ytomymotherandIlookathertilltheviewofherbackdisappears.Uptonow,evenifheisbusy,shestilldoesitasusual.Theviewofmymother"sbackwillneverchangeinmyheart.(-)［2012-银川实验中学月考］Lastyear,Iwasaddictedwithplayingcomputergames・Ifoundithardtobreakingawayfromthebadhabit.Myteachertalkedtomyparentsaboutthis,andtheymademetopromisenottoplaythosegamesagain.Itriedhard,butIfoundituselessly.Themomentmyfingersleftthekeyboard,Iwouldfeelveryuncomfortable.BecauseIwasdeterminedtoforgetthegames,Istillcouldnotconcentrateonthelessonsgivinginclasses・Fortunately,psychologicaladvisorinourschoolcametoknowthis.Hetalkswithmeabouthisproblem.Atlast,heofferedhisadvicesonhowtogetridoftheaddiction・Now1canmanagetocontrolmyself.［解析］Lastyear,Iwasaddictedwi电playingcomputergames.Ifoundithardtobreaki^^awayfromthebadhabit・Myteachertalkedtomyparentsaboutthis,andtheymademetopromisenottoplaythosegamesagain.Itriedhard,butIfounditusclcssl?Themomentmyfingersleftthekeyboard,Iwouldfeelveryuncomfortable.BecauseIwasdeterminedtoforgetthegames,Istillcouldnotconcentrateonthelessonsgivinginclasses.Fortunately,Apsychologicaladvisorinourschoolcametoknowthis.Hetalks“withmeabouthisproblem・Atlast,heofferedhisadvicesonhowtogetridoftheaddiction.NowIcan—inyadvicemanagetocontrolmyself.26.IlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittleaggressive.FromthetimeIwasaboutfouruntilIwasaboutsix,Idestroyedeachofmytoy.Iwashappywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingsdidwrong,Igotangryandbrokeit.Forawhileparentsboughtmenewtoys-Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening.WhenItearapartmyfifthbirthdaytoytrain,myfathersaid,“That"sit.Nomoretoystoyou：Mypunishmentlastedayear.Meanwhile,IfoundoutthatwithmorepatienceImustmakemytoystolast.Myattitudechangedfromthenon.［解析］wentIlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittleaggressive.FromthetimeIwasaboutfouruntilIwasaboutsix,Idestroyedeachofmyto.Iwashappywhenthetoysworked,but whenthingsdid/Awrong,Igotangryandbrokeit・ForawhileAparentsboughtme—u^ent/go"themmynewtoys・Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhich(washappening.WhenItea(rapartmyfifthbirthdaytoytrain,myfathersaid,"That"sit.Nomoretoystoyou.”Mypunishmentlastedayear.Meanwhile,IfoundoutthatwithmorepatienceImust.makemytoystolast.MyattitudecouldTniightchangedfromthenon.1.little-less考查副词的用法。根据句意：我不得不多一些耐心而少一些挑衅性。此处less修饰形容词。2.toy-toys考查名词的单复数形式。根据eachof可知，应该是“我”的玩具中的每一个，故用复数形式toys。3.did—went或者did后加go考查固定短语的表达法。解题关键：掌握短语gowrong意为：出错。4.it-*them考查代词指代一致。此处指前文的toys,所以后文用theme5.在parents前加my考查代词的用法。英语中需前后一致，myparentsboughtmenewtoys.此处my和me对应。6.which-what考查名词性从句的连接词。此处what作宾语从句的主语。句意：明白所发生的一切。7.tear-*tore考查动词时态。通过观察整个文章的时态以及myfifthbirthday可知，此处用一般过去时。&to-for考查介词的用法。此处意为：不再给你买玩具了。toysforsb意为：给某人的玩具。9.must-could/might考查情态动词。根据句意：拥有更多的耐心，“我”就可能使玩具使用得更久。10.去掉last前的to考查不定式作宾语补足语。解题关键：makesb/sthdo,此处make作“使”解，其后接不带to的不定式作宾补。27.下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Twoyearsbefore,ItraveledtoBrazilandIrentedforacar.Unfortunate,Ihadanaccidentandhitanothercar,andIneededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwoweek.Icalledmyparents,soIdidnottellthemwhathadhappened.IknewthattheywillbeworriedaboutmyselfbecauseIwassofartheraway,andthatmymotherwouldnotsleepifsheknew.Therefore,ItoldtheminterestedstoriesandhowIwasenjoyingBrazil.Asaresult,nobodyknewtruth.Istillthinkthatitwastherightthingtodo.［答案］Twoyearsbefbre,ItraveledtoBrazilandIrentedfbr"acar.Unfbrtunate,IhadanagoUnfortunatelyaccidentandhitanothercar,andIneededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwoweek・Icalledmyweeksparents,soIdidnottellthemwhathadhappened・Iknewthattheywil1beworriedabout"ButwtMildmysclfbecauseIwassofarthe^raway,andthatmymotherwouldnotsleepifsheknew.Therefore,Itoldtheminterestsd.storiesandhowIwasenjoyingBrazil.Asaresult,nobodyknewAinterestingthetruth.Istillthinkthatitwastherightthingtodo. 28.MyfatherandIstayedattheSouthLakeHotelforaweekwhenwevisitBeijinglastmonth.Itisinthedowntownarea,butitiseasytogotoanywherefromthehotelbypublictransport.Wclivedinacomfortablydouble-roomwithabigbath.WhatIlikedbestwerethefreehigh-speedInternetconnectionintheroom.Icheekedmyemailmessageseveryday.IalsosharedformyfriendsmanyphotostakinginBeijing.Thefoodwaswonderfulwithreasonableprices,andweenjoyedseverallocaldish.ItissuchgreathotelthatIwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhoisgoingtoBeijing.［解析］MyfatherandIstayedattheSouthLakeHoteltoraweekwhenwevisitBeijinglastvisitedmonth.Itisinthedowntownarea,buj,.^itiseasytogoto"anywhcrefromthehotelbypublictransport・Wclivedinacomfbrtablvdouble-roomwithabigbath.WhatIlikedbestwcrcthefreehigh-speedInternetconnectionintheroom・Icheckedmyemailmessageseveryday.Ialsosharedfo韦myfriendsmanyphotostaking枚inBeijing・Thefoodwaswonderfulwithreasonableprices,andweenjoyedseverallocaldish.disKesItissuchAgreathotelthatIwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhoisgoingtoaniinevisit—visited根据时间状语lastmonth可知本句时态是一般过去时，故动词用过去式。but-*and/so前后文是承接或因果关系，故连词用and或so。to去掉anywhere是指地点的副词，其前不用介词。comfortably-*comfortable修饰名词double-room应用形容词。were-*waswhat引导主语从句，其谓语动词应用单数形式，故系动词were改为was。for-*with动词share与介词with构成搭配，意思是""和某人分享”。taking-*takentake与所修饰词photos是逻辑上的动宾关系，故用过去分词作后置定Beijing.1.2.3・4.5.6.7・语。dishfdishessuch后加a由several修饰，名词应用复数。such修饰的hotel是可数名词单数，需加不定冠词a。双重所有格的构成是“Of+名词性物主代词或名词所有格”O8.10.me—mine9・29.DearMary,Fvereceivedyoure-mail.Don"tworriedaboutme.Pmgettingonwellwithmyresearchworkinthelab.Butinmysurprise,yousayyouwillgiveuplearnEnglish.Thereasonisbecauseyouhavenotdonewellinitrecentlyandyouhaveloseinterest.IrmafraidIcan"tagreewithyou.IknowitisnoteasytolearnEnglish,anditiswidelyusedintheworldtodayanditwillbeimportanttoolinthefuture.Beside,itisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinourdailylifb.Iamsurethatifyoustudyhardly,youwillsucceed・I"mlookingfonvardtohearingagoodnewsfromyou!Yours,LiHua［解析］worriedworryaboutme.PmgettingonwellwithmyDearMary,Fvereceivedyoure-mail.Don"tresearchworkinthelab.Butinmysurprise,yousayyouwillgiveuplearn.English.The"Tolearningreasonisbecauseyouhavenotdonewellinitrecentlyandyouhaveloseinterest・PmafraidItKat7JJ一lostcan"tagreewithyou.IknowitisnoteasytolearnEnglish,an代itiswidelyusedintheworldtoday anditwillbeAimportanttoolinthefuture.Bcside,itisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantanBesidesyouwillsucceed.Pmlookingforwardtoinourdailylifb.Iamsurethatifyoustudyha叫畀『hearingagoodnewsfromyou!Yours,LiHua30・DearWeiFang,It"salongtimesinceIheardfromyouinlasttime.NowFdliketotellyouaimpressivestorythathappenedonthefirstdayofmyteachingcarcc匚Aboy,LiMing,whomfatherdiedamonthago，waslateforschool.Hestoodoutsidetheclassroomsilent.Ismiledtohimandlethimcome.Afterawhile,hebegantocry.Seeingthis,Iwalkedtohimandaskedwhathashappened・Hetoldmehismotherwasillbuthehadtogetsomemedicineforhe匚Atthesametime,heapologizedtomeforhislateness.Movedbyhisword,Ipraisedhimforhisdeedsanddecidedtosingasongwasnamed"Mother^torthestudents・Fromthenon,Ibegantorealizeweshouldrespectourparentsanddidourbesttohelpthem.Doyouthinkso?I"mlookingforwardtoyourreply.懈析］DearWeiFang,IfsalongtimesinceIheardfromyouinlasttime.NowVdliketotellyouaimpressivestorythathappenedonthefirstdayofmyteachingcareer.Aboy,LiMing,whomfatherdiedamonthago,waslateforschool.HestoodoutsidethewKUscclassroomsilen.t.1smiledtohimandlethimcome或/・silentlyininAfterawhile,hebegantocry.Seeingthis,Iwalkedtohimandaskedwhatha^happened.Hetoldmehismotherwasillbuthehadtogetsomemedicineforher.Atthesametime,heandapologizedtomeforhislateness.Movedbyhiswor^d^,IpraisedhimforhisdeedsanddecidedtosingasongAwasnamed"Mother"forthestudents・oQthat/which或Fromthenon,Ibegantorealizewcshouldrespectourparentsanddidourbesttohelp—dothem.Doyouthinkso?I"mlookingforwardtoyourreply.3LDearDiana,Thankyouforthelovelydaywchavewithyou.ItwassokindforyoutoletusbringAnne"sfriend,Gina.Unfortunate,theonlyproblemwasthejourneyhome・Therehadbeenaterribleaccidentonthehighwayand,foraresult,therewasalonglineoftrafficforatleastsixmile.Intheend,wedrovetoaservicestationandwaitedthereunlesstheroadwasclear.InthecarparkhereGinanearlygotknockedoverascardroveoutfartooquicklyfrombehindalorry.TheyfinallydroppedGinaoffatherparents1andmadeourownwaytohome・［解析］DearDiana,Thankyouforthelovelydaywehavewithyou.ItwassokindforyoutoletusbringAnne"s~hadoffriend.Gina.Unfortunate,theonlyproblemwasthejourneyhome・TherehadbeenaUnforfunalclyJrJJterribleaccidentonthehighwayand,foraresult,therewasalonglineoftrafficforatleastsixasmile.Intheend,wedrovetoaservicestationandwaitedthereunlesstheroadwasclear.InmiTesuntmtillthecarparkhereGinanearlygotknockedoverasAcardroveoutfartooquicklyfrombehindatlicrealorry.The律finallydroppedGinaoffatherparents1andmadeourownwaytorhome.76.have—had。全文讲述的是过去的事情，因此用过去时。77.for-^ofcIt"skindofsb.todosth•为固定句式。78.Unfortunate^Unfortunately。副词作状语，修饰全句。 76.foraresult中的for-*asoasaresult为固定短语,意思是"因而”。77.mile—mileso前面有six修饰，因此名词应该用复数形式。78.unless-*until/till0空后的内容是前面的时间状语。79.herethereo讲述离自己远的地方用thereo80.ascar中I"可加a。car是可数名词单数，因此用a。81.They-Weo全文用第一人称讲述发生在自己身上的事情。82.去掉home前的to。home是副词,前面没有介词。32.Weseniorschoolstudentsdohavesomegrowingpains.Takesomeofmyclassmateforexample,theyoftenfeelupsetbecausetheexpectationsfromparents,endlesshomeworkandthepressureofexams.Theseseriousaffecttheirphysicalandmentalwell-being・ThereforetIthinkaboutitquitenecessarytotakemeasurestorelievethepains・First,thatisagoodideatohavehcart-to-hcarttalkswithourparentstellthemwcwon’tdisappointthem.Meanwhile,it’sadvisabletosparesometimetotakesomeexercisebesideourdevotiontothestudiessothatwewillalwaysfeelrelaxingandenergetic.Aslongaswewerefullyprepared,wearesuretoachievegreatsuccessinmyacademicperformance・［解析］Weseniorschoolstudentsdohavesomegrowingpains.Takesomeofmyclassmateforclassniatesexample,theyoftenfeelupsetbecauseAtheexpectationsfromparents,endlesshomeworkandthepressureofexams・Theseseriousaflecttheirphysicalandmentalwell-being・Therefore,Ithinkseriouslyaboutitquitenecessarytotakemeasurestorelievethepains.First,tha{isagoodideatohaveheart-to-hearttalkswithourparents,tej1themwewon’tdisappointthem.Meanwhile,it’s(einngadvisabletosparesometimetotakesomeexercisebesideourdevotiontothestudiessothatwewillalwaysfeelrelaxin摄“andenergetic.Aslongaswewerefullyprepared,wearesuretoachievegreatsuccessinmvacademicperformance.—our