广东省天河区高考英语语法二轮复习：短文改错精讲精炼02含答案 6页

短文改错精讲精炼026.OnSaturdayafternoon,LiHuaandWangPin已membersfrom"GreenEyes；washavinganenvironmentalprotectionactivityneartheriversidewhentheycatchsightofabirdontheground.Theypickeditoutandfounditwounded・Thinkingitshoulddiewithouttimelyhelp,theytookithome.Undertheirtreatmentandcare,theluckybirdgotrecoveredsoon.Whentimecameforthemtoflythebird,theyfeltabitofpitybutverydelightfulIthinkit"sworthwhileforhimtodosuchathing.HereIcallonthepublictoshowrespectsforthenature・Onlybychangingthewaywhichwetreattheenvironmentcanwegetalongwellwithit.【答案】OnSaturdayafternoon,LiHuaandWangPing,membersfrom"GreenEyes；washavinganwereenvironmentaiprotectionactivityneartheriversidewhentheycatchsightofabirdontheground.Theycaughtpickeditoutandfounditwounded・Thinkingitshoulddiewithouttimelyhelp,theytookithome. Under theirtreatmentandcare,theluckybirdgotrecoveredsoon.Whentimecameforthemtoflythebird,theyfeltabitofpitybutverydelightfulIthinkit"sworthwhileforhimtodosuchathing.HereIcallonthe去掉ofdelightedthempublictoshowrespectsforthenature・Onlybychangingthewaywhichwetreattheenvironmentcanwe去掉theinwhich/that/去掉getalongwellwithit.7.OurEnglishteacherisamiddle-agedwoman,whohadbeenteachingEnglishformorethan20years.Sheisalwaysworkinghard・Foramodelteacherformanyyears,sheiskindandfriendlytousandverystrictwithus.Inclass,shealwaysencouragesusspeakandreadEnglishasmuchaspossible・Sheisquitegoodatteachingandtrytomakeherlessonsliveandinteresting・InherspareSheIntime,sheoftenteachesusEnglishsongandhelpsustoputonEnglishshortplays.Shelovesusso10muchassheisalwaysreadytohelpus.Inthefact,sheisnotonlyourgoodteacherbutalsoourgoodfriend.Weallrespectandlovehim.OurEnglishteacherisamiddle-agedwoman,whohadbeenteachingEnglishformorethanhas20years・Sheisalwaysworkinghard.Foramodelteacherformanyyears,sheiskindandtriendlyAs/Beingtousandverystrictwithus.Inclass,shealwaysencouragesusAspeakandreadEnglishasbuttomuchaspossible・Sheisquitegoodatteachingandtrytomakeherlessonsliveandinteresting.Intrieslively hersparetime,sheoftenteachesusEnglishsongandhelpsustoputonEnglishshortplays.Shesongslovesussomuchassheisalwaysreadytohelpus.Inhefact,sheisnotonlyourgoodteacherbutthat（删除as亦可）alsoourgoodfriend.Weallrespectandlovehim.her8.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句屮最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏词符号【/】，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线【】划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下血写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者【从第□处起】不计分。ThedayismyDad"sbirthday.ThisafternoonIwenttotheshoppingcenterdowntown,andboughtpresentforhim・ThenItookthesubwaytraintohome.Sittingonthetrain,Ithoughtmydadwillbeveryhappywhenshesawthepresent・Atthenextstation,anoldladywithtwoheavybaggotintothetrainandstoodinfrontofme.Shelookedtiring.Ihesitatedforamoment,andthenofferedmyseattoher.Theoldladythankedmealotandsatdown.Seenhersmile,Ifelthappily・Iwillalwaysreadytohelpothersinthefuture・第二句present前加a；第三句home前的to去掉；第四句will改为would,she改为he;第五句bag改为bagsjnto改为on;第六句tiring改为tired;第九句Seen改为Seeing,happily改为happy;第十句always后加be9. [2012-银川一屮模拟】IjustcomebackfromBritainlastweek.IwasluckilyenoughtobeoneofthestudentfromdifferentcountriestovisittheUKfromFeb.16to28.Wepaidavisittomanyplaces,likeLondon,OxfordortheLakeDistrict.IlearnedmuchaboutBritishcultureandhistoryinLondon,wherewasmyfavorite・IalsolikedOxford,inwhichIsawmuchmoreoldbuildings・TheLakeDistrictwasbeaut讦ul,butitwaspitythatitrainedheavilywhentheywerethere.ThemostexcitedthingformeintheBritainwasthatImadealotoffriendsthere・短文改错：IjustcomebackfromBritainlastweek.IwasluckilyenoughtobecameluckyoneofthestudentfromdifferentcountriestovisittheUKfromFeb.16tostudents28.Wepaidavisittomanyplaces,likeLondon,Oxfordor_andtheLakeDistrict.IlearnedmuchaboutBritishcultureandhistoryinLondon,wherewasmyfavorite・IalsolikedOxford,inwhichIsawmuchwhichmanymoreoldbuildings■TheLakeDistrictwasbeautiful,butitwasApityathatitrainedheavilywhentheywerethere.ThemostexcitedthingweexcitingformeinthBritainwasthatImadealotoffriendsthere.10.Nowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareconcerningabouttheirhealth,buthowtokeephealth?First,itisnecessarytotakeanyexerciseeveryday.Researchshowsthatgetplentyofexercisemakestheheartbeatfastandthelungsworkharder・Second,eatmorefruits,vegetableandlessmeat.Third,gettingridofbadhabitsassmokinganddrinkingisalsoimportantwaytokeephealthy.Smokingandalcoholdrinkinginjuresone"shealthagreatdeal,andthereforeshouldbegivenup. Ifpeoplefollowthesethreewaysofkeepingfit,they"llgreatimprovetheirhealth.【参考答案】第一句中的concerning改为concerned,考察词组beconcernedaboutsb./sth.关心、挂念某人/某事；health改为healthy,因为keep为连系动词,后面要跟形容词。第二句中any改为some,any—般用于疑问句或否定句屮，在肯定句屮意为"任何"。第三句中get改为getting,在句中作宾语从句的主语；fast改为faster,与harder保持一致。第四句中改为vegetables,这是可数名词第五句中as改为like,as作介词用意为“作为,当......时候w,like作介词用意为〃像，比如,诸如......Z类important前加an,因为way是可数名词。第六句中injures改为injure,smokingandalcoholdrinking为并列主语，动词要用复数。第七句中great改为greatly,修饰动词improve要使用副词。