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近十年（2021--2012）高考英语书面表达满分范文（七）书面表达(2017·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：视频video________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】本文属于看图说话类作文。首先要读懂图片隐含的信息，本文有四幅图，而且要求是按先后顺序，所以一定要注意顺序的问题；其次，根据图片隐含的信息把每幅图的主题找到，然后分别写出每幅图的主题句，也就是说把文章主体部分的大纲要列好，最后结合自己的看法，写出相应的总结和感受。写作的过程中一定要注意先后顺序，巧用连接词，巧妙衔接，合理安排。1.Inordertoleavesomeimpressivememoriesforallofusbeforegraduation,ourclassmadeaspecialvideotoexpressourappreciationto…2.carriedoutadiscussion/variousideaswereputforward3.shotsomewonderfulvideosintheschool/interviewedourteachers…4.Thosewhoaretalentedincomputercontributedtothemakingofthevideo.5.editedthevideo/addedourloveto…6.Theshowreceivedawarmwelcomeamongourfellowschoolmates.7.Memoriesofthepastfloodedintoourminds内容要点：1.讨论分工；2.收集素材；3.编辑制作；4.放映视频学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【参考范文】Onepossibleversion：Graduationfinallycame.MyclassmatesandIdecidedtodosomething.Afteraheateddiscussion,weagreedonmakingavideotorecordourexperiencesatschool.Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek,duringwhichweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.Theeditingpartafterthatwastough.Wedebatedoverwhattoputintothevideo.Somecompromiseswereunavoidable,butthevideoturnedoutperfect.Severaldayslater,whenthevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony,itwaswellreceived.Thestudentsandteacherssharedagreattime.Thatsurelygaveusagreatsenseofachievement.【2016年】（2016·北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“ActionsforaGreenerEarth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：地球日EarthDay【答案】ActionsforaGreenerEarthAweekbeforeEarthDay,posterswereputuparoundourschool,callinguponustojoinintheactionsforagreenerearth.Ourclasscameupwiththeideatomakebetteruseofusedmaterials.Webroughttoourclassroomworn-outclothes,piecesofcardboardandemptyplasticbottlesandturnedthoseintodolls,handbags,tissueboxesandsmallvases.Thatweekend,wewenttoanearbyneighborhoodandgavethemawaytothepeoplethere.Allwereveryhappywiththoseunexpectedgifts,especiallylittlekidsandelderlypeople.Wedidsowellthatwewereinvitedtoshareourideaandexperiencewithallthestudentsofourschool.学科网（北京）股份有限公司 Weareveryproudofourselvesandbelievewecandomoreforabetterworld.【解析】话题比较常规，整体难度适中。“地球日”系列活动属于保护环境的题材内容，考生并不陌生。内容主要包括：公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。题目要求按照四幅图的先后顺序，以“ActionsforaGreenerEarth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。词数不少于60词，参考词汇必须使用。使用一般过去时和第一人称进行写作。范文使用了非谓语动词callinguponustojoinintheactions和so...that句型与宾语从句wecandomoreforabetterworld等，句式多样；还使用了固定词组calluponsb.todosth.,joinin,comeupwith,makeuseof,turn...into,giveaway,beproudof等，使作文内容变得丰富。（2016·江苏卷）请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Inrecentyears,internetvotinghasbecomeincreasinglypopularinChina.Peoplenotonlycaston-linevotesthemselves,butalsourgeotherstovoteforcompetitionslikethe“MostBeautifulTeacher”andthe“CutestBaby”.LiJiang,ahighschoolstudent,isinvitedtovoteinthe“BestPoliceOfficer”competition,organizedbythelocalgovernmenttoletthepublichaveabetterunderstandingofpoliceofficers’dailywork.LiJiangvisitsthewebsiteandreadsallthestories.Heisdeeplymovedbytheirgloriousdeeds.Heisalreadythinkingofbecomingapolicemanhimselfinthefuture.SuHuaisinvitedbyhisuncletovoteforhiscousininthe“FutureSinger”competition.Hehasalreadyreceivedthreesimilarinvitationsthisweek.Hisuncletellshimthatifhiscousinwinsthecompetition,thefamilywillwinanoverseastourforfree.SuHualikeshiscousinverymuch,buthefindsothersingersperformevenbetter.Tovote,ornottovote?Thisisaquestionthattroubleshimverymuch.【写作内容】1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；2.用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。【答案】Possibleversionone:On-linevotingbecomesincreasinglypopular,andmanycompetitionsgetpeopleinvolvedinit.Itisbeneficialtosomepeople,whileitputsothersintoadilemmaoverwhethertovoteornot.Inmyopinion,on-linevotingisaninseparablepartofmodernlifeandshouldbewelcomed,sinceitisnomorethanawaytoparticipateinpubliclife.Itmakesnodifferencefromordinaryvotingevents,inwhich学科网（北京）股份有限公司 candidatesgoaroundtoseeksupports.Inaddition,theInternetmakessurveyingandvotingeasyandconvenient,regardlessoftimeandspace.Furthermore,votingontheInternetmakesinstantfeedbackpossible.Tobehonest,voterssometimesfeelannoyed,notbecausetheyhatevoting,butbecausetheyaredividedbetweenemotionandfairness.Thingswillturnforthebetterifwecanworkoutsomeparticipationrulesforpeopletoobey.Therefore,Iholdapositiveattitudetowardson-linevoting.(150words)Possibleversiontwo:Internetvotingisquitepopularnowadays.Manypeoplearesomewhatpuzzledatthenegativesideofthevoting,althoughsomearequitehappywithit,andactiveindoingit.Inmyopinion,Internetvotinghasbeguntoshowitsnegativeimpactsonpeopleandsociety.Firstly,peoplemayfeelforcedwhenaskedtodothingsthattheydon’twanttodo.Secondly,votingofthiskinddoesnotdependonthestrongpointsofthecompetitors,butratheronhowmanysocial-networkingresourcestheyhave.Thirdly,thevotersoreventhecompetitorsinmanycasesarepossiblytakenadvantageofbytheorganizersforcommercialpurposes.Inshort,Internetvoting,tosomeextent,isunfair,ifnotimmoral,andcannotbetrusted.Therefore,rulesshouldbeworkedoutandstrictlyobserved.Everyoneinoursocietyshouldhelpthoseinneed,butitismoreimportanttobesincereandearnest.(150words)【解析】此类作文对考生的能力要求极高。首先考生要以30字概述短文内容。接下来就网络投票发表个人看法并提出理由和根据。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1.概述：网络投票越来越流行，几乎人人都参与了网络投票，在给人们带来好处的同时，有时候也让人进退两难不知道是否应该参加这样的投票。2.支持：网络投票和生活密切相关，我们应该积极参与。理由及依据：（1）它是一种社会生活的方式，网络投票方便容易，不受时间和地点的束缚，同时网络投票的反馈迅速可靠；（2）虽然有时候网络投票也会给我们带来困扰，但如果有更好的参与规则，网络投票会更加规范合理。3.反对：网络投票会给人带来负面影响：（1）人们会因为网络投票而产生被迫的感觉；（2）网络投票结果并不客观；（3）网络投票可能会被故意利用。建议考生在写作概述时，语言简练不拖沓。（2016·浙江卷）“Planningisgood,butdoingisbetter”是一句英国名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100~120词的短文。要求如下：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计入总词数）；2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。PlanningIsGood,butDoingIsBetter_____________________________________________________________________________________学科网（北京）股份有限公司 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OnePossibleVersionPlanningIsGood,butDoingIsBetterPlanningisgoodasitdecidesindetailhowwedowhatwewanttodo.However,aplancanbearnofruitwithoutbeingactuallycarriedout.MyexperienceintheEnglishspeechcontestlastOctoberisacaseinpoint.Amonthbeforetheevent,Ispenthoursworkingoutascheduleoutliningmygoalsandpracticalsteps.Afterthat,Isetouttoreadwidelyforaninspiringtopic,wroteaspeech,andpracticeditsdeliveryinbeautifulpronunciationwithgoodpublicspeechskills.Ifinallycameoutofthecontestasthefirstprizewinner.IknowhowIachievedmysuccess.Itcamefromgoodplanningandbetterdoingcombined.【解析】本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目可判断出主要是介绍将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写，不能跑题。提纲部分还要求三个方面：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定了作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后，还要注意文章应用第一人称、一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时发挥自己的想象，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来。注意要主次分明、详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章自然连贯。最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【2015年】(2015·安徽)某英文杂志正在举办以“Fancyyourselfasaninterviewer”为主题的征文活动，请你以“AFamousChineseIWouldLiketoInterview”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1.采访的对象；2.采访的原因；3.想提的问题。注意：1.词数120左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.短文的标题已给出，不计人总词数。AFamousChineseIWouldLiketoInterview________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】学科网（北京）股份有限公司 AFamousChineseIWouldLiketoInterviewThepersonIwouldliketointerviewisYangLiwei.IwouldreallyliketointerviewhimbecauseheisnotonlythefirstChinesetogotospacebutalsooneofthegreatestastronautsintheworld.IhavelongbeeninterestedinspaceexplorationandIbelieveIcouldlearnagreatdealfromhimaboutit.IfIcouldinterviewhim,Iwouldaskhimwhatmadehimanastronautandhowhewastrained.IwouldalsoliketoknowhowhefeltinspaceandwhetherspacetravelissuchgreatfunasIhaveread.Finally,Iwouldliketoaskafewquestionsabouthispersonallife,whichmustbeveryinteresting.【解析】题目是一篇命题材料作文。作文的写作要点已经给出，需要考生根据提示进行写作，作文必须涵盖所有要点，还要注意语篇的连贯性。注意使用高级词汇和定语从句、倒装、强调等重点语法知识。词数在120左右，标题不计入总词数。注意行文的连贯性，不能出现与本人有关的信息。【亮点说明】范文使用了一些重点句型：定语从句IwouldliketointerviewisYangLiwei；原因状语从句becauseheisnotonlythefirstChinese...；宾语从句①Icouldlearnagreatdealfromhimaboutit，②whatmadehimanastronautandhowhewastrained；条件状语从句IfIcouldinterviewhim；非限制性定语从句whichmustbeveryinteresting等，显示了扎实的语法功底，也使作文的句式变得多样；范文还使用了一些固定搭配和固定短语：notonly...butalso...；oneofthe...；thefirsttodosth.；beinterestedin；agreatdeal；such...as等，使作文的内容变得更加丰富；范文注意使用notonly...butalso,and,also和finally等来衔接句子，使范文显得语意连贯、衔接紧凑。【考点定位】命题类材料作文【名师点睛】题目给出了一个征文的通知，要求考生根据提示以“AFamousChineseIWouldLiketoInterview”为题，写一篇英语短文。题目属于命题作文，不过，题目给出了写作的框架，一定程度上降低了难度。需要注意的是，所写的作文必须涵盖所有的要点，如果能够使用高级词汇和重要句型，将会给作文增色不少。(2015·湖南)SectionC(25marks)Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelow.请以老师当众表扬你为话题，用下面所给的句子开头，续写一篇英语短文。Asastudent,Icantellyouthatthereisnothingbetterthanbeingpraisedbymyteacherbeforemyclassmates.注意：1.将所有句子写在答题卡上；2.续写词数不少于120个；3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。【答案】Onepossibleversion：Asastudent,Icantellyouthatthereisnothingbetterthanbeingpraisedbymyteacherbeforemyclassmates.Yesterdayafternoon,LiMingandIwenthometogetherafterschool.Suddenlywesawanoldladyknocked学科网（北京）股份有限公司 downbyacar.Thedriverranawayinhiscar.LiMingandIranovertofindthattheoldlady’sheadwasbleeding.Shehadalreadylostconsciousness.ImmediatelyItookoutmyhandkerchiefandcoveredthewoundwithit.LiMingstoppedataxiquickly.Togetherweputtheoldladyintothetaxianddrovehertothenearesthospital.Theoldladywassavedandwealsofeltverypleased.What’smore,Irememberedthenumberofthecar,andthetrafficpolicecaughtthedriverlater.学科网（北京）股份有限公司