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近十年(2021--2012)高考英语书面表达满分范文(七)书面表达(2017·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。注意:词数不少于60。提示词:视频video________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】本文属于看图说话类作文。首先要读懂图片隐含的信息,本文有四幅图,而且要求是按先后顺序,所以一定要注意顺序的问题;其次,根据图片隐含的信息把每幅图的主题找到,然后分别写出每幅图的主题句,也就是说把文章主体部分的大纲要列好,最后结合自己的看法,写出相应的总结和感受。写作的过程中一定要注意先后顺序,巧用连接词,巧妙衔接,合理安排。1.Inordertoleavesomeimpressivememoriesforallofusbeforegraduation,ourclassmadeaspecialvideotoexpressourappreciationto…2.carriedoutadiscussion/variousideaswereputforward3.shotsomewonderfulvideosintheschool/interviewedourteachers…4.Thosewhoaretalentedincomputercontributedtothemakingofthevideo.5.editedthevideo/addedourloveto…6.Theshowreceivedawarmwelcomeamongourfellowschoolmates.7.Memoriesofthepastfloodedintoourminds内容要点:1.讨论分工;2.收集素材;3.编辑制作;4.放映视频学科网(北京)股份有限公司
【参考范文】Onepossibleversion:Graduationfinallycame.MyclassmatesandIdecidedtodosomething.Afteraheateddiscussion,weagreedonmakingavideotorecordourexperiencesatschool.Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek,duringwhichweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.Theeditingpartafterthatwastough.Wedebatedoverwhattoputintothevideo.Somecompromiseswereunavoidable,butthevideoturnedoutperfect.Severaldayslater,whenthevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony,itwaswellreceived.Thestudentsandteacherssharedagreattime.Thatsurelygaveusagreatsenseofachievement.【2016年】(2016·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,以“ActionsforaGreenerEarth”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件,介绍活动的全过程。注意:词数不少于60。提示词:地球日EarthDay【答案】ActionsforaGreenerEarthAweekbeforeEarthDay,posterswereputuparoundourschool,callinguponustojoinintheactionsforagreenerearth.Ourclasscameupwiththeideatomakebetteruseofusedmaterials.Webroughttoourclassroomworn-outclothes,piecesofcardboardandemptyplasticbottlesandturnedthoseintodolls,handbags,tissueboxesandsmallvases.Thatweekend,wewenttoanearbyneighborhoodandgavethemawaytothepeoplethere.Allwereveryhappywiththoseunexpectedgifts,especiallylittlekidsandelderlypeople.Wedidsowellthatwewereinvitedtoshareourideaandexperiencewithallthestudentsofourschool.学科网(北京)股份有限公司
Weareveryproudofourselvesandbelievewecandomoreforabetterworld.【解析】话题比较常规,整体难度适中。“地球日”系列活动属于保护环境的题材内容,考生并不陌生。内容主要包括:公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。题目要求按照四幅图的先后顺序,以“ActionsforaGreenerEarth”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件,介绍活动的全过程。词数不少于60词,参考词汇必须使用。使用一般过去时和第一人称进行写作。范文使用了非谓语动词callinguponustojoinintheactions和so...that句型与宾语从句wecandomoreforabetterworld等,句式多样;还使用了固定词组calluponsb.todosth.,joinin,comeupwith,makeuseof,turn...into,giveaway,beproudof等,使作文内容变得丰富。(2016·江苏卷)请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Inrecentyears,internetvotinghasbecomeincreasinglypopularinChina.Peoplenotonlycaston-linevotesthemselves,butalsourgeotherstovoteforcompetitionslikethe“MostBeautifulTeacher”andthe“CutestBaby”.LiJiang,ahighschoolstudent,isinvitedtovoteinthe“BestPoliceOfficer”competition,organizedbythelocalgovernmenttoletthepublichaveabetterunderstandingofpoliceofficers’dailywork.LiJiangvisitsthewebsiteandreadsallthestories.Heisdeeplymovedbytheirgloriousdeeds.Heisalreadythinkingofbecomingapolicemanhimselfinthefuture.SuHuaisinvitedbyhisuncletovoteforhiscousininthe“FutureSinger”competition.Hehasalreadyreceivedthreesimilarinvitationsthisweek.Hisuncletellshimthatifhiscousinwinsthecompetition,thefamilywillwinanoverseastourforfree.SuHualikeshiscousinverymuch,buthefindsothersingersperformevenbetter.Tovote,ornottovote?Thisisaquestionthattroubleshimverymuch.【写作内容】1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;2.用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法,并用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。【答案】Possibleversionone:On-linevotingbecomesincreasinglypopular,andmanycompetitionsgetpeopleinvolvedinit.Itisbeneficialtosomepeople,whileitputsothersintoadilemmaoverwhethertovoteornot.Inmyopinion,on-linevotingisaninseparablepartofmodernlifeandshouldbewelcomed,sinceitisnomorethanawaytoparticipateinpubliclife.Itmakesnodifferencefromordinaryvotingevents,inwhich学科网(北京)股份有限公司
candidatesgoaroundtoseeksupports.Inaddition,theInternetmakessurveyingandvotingeasyandconvenient,regardlessoftimeandspace.Furthermore,votingontheInternetmakesinstantfeedbackpossible.Tobehonest,voterssometimesfeelannoyed,notbecausetheyhatevoting,butbecausetheyaredividedbetweenemotionandfairness.Thingswillturnforthebetterifwecanworkoutsomeparticipationrulesforpeopletoobey.Therefore,Iholdapositiveattitudetowardson-linevoting.(150words)Possibleversiontwo:Internetvotingisquitepopularnowadays.Manypeoplearesomewhatpuzzledatthenegativesideofthevoting,althoughsomearequitehappywithit,andactiveindoingit.Inmyopinion,Internetvotinghasbeguntoshowitsnegativeimpactsonpeopleandsociety.Firstly,peoplemayfeelforcedwhenaskedtodothingsthattheydon’twanttodo.Secondly,votingofthiskinddoesnotdependonthestrongpointsofthecompetitors,butratheronhowmanysocial-networkingresourcestheyhave.Thirdly,thevotersoreventhecompetitorsinmanycasesarepossiblytakenadvantageofbytheorganizersforcommercialpurposes.Inshort,Internetvoting,tosomeextent,isunfair,ifnotimmoral,andcannotbetrusted.Therefore,rulesshouldbeworkedoutandstrictlyobserved.Everyoneinoursocietyshouldhelpthoseinneed,butitismoreimportanttobesincereandearnest.(150words)【解析】此类作文对考生的能力要求极高。首先考生要以30字概述短文内容。接下来就网络投票发表个人看法并提出理由和根据。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点:1.概述:网络投票越来越流行,几乎人人都参与了网络投票,在给人们带来好处的同时,有时候也让人进退两难不知道是否应该参加这样的投票。2.支持:网络投票和生活密切相关,我们应该积极参与。理由及依据:(1)它是一种社会生活的方式,网络投票方便容易,不受时间和地点的束缚,同时网络投票的反馈迅速可靠;(2)虽然有时候网络投票也会给我们带来困扰,但如果有更好的参与规则,网络投票会更加规范合理。3.反对:网络投票会给人带来负面影响:(1)人们会因为网络投票而产生被迫的感觉;(2)网络投票结果并不客观;(3)网络投票可能会被故意利用。建议考生在写作概述时,语言简练不拖沓。(2016·浙江卷)“Planningisgood,butdoingisbetter”是一句英国名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100~120词的短文。要求如下:1.简述你对这句名言的理解;2.用一个具体事例加以说明;3.给出恰当的结尾。注意:1.文章的标题已给出(不计入总词数);2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息,否则按作弊行为认定。PlanningIsGood,butDoingIsBetter_____________________________________________________________________________________学科网(北京)股份有限公司
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OnePossibleVersionPlanningIsGood,butDoingIsBetterPlanningisgoodasitdecidesindetailhowwedowhatwewanttodo.However,aplancanbearnofruitwithoutbeingactuallycarriedout.MyexperienceintheEnglishspeechcontestlastOctoberisacaseinpoint.Amonthbeforetheevent,Ispenthoursworkingoutascheduleoutliningmygoalsandpracticalsteps.Afterthat,Isetouttoreadwidelyforaninspiringtopic,wroteaspeech,andpracticeditsdeliveryinbeautifulpronunciationwithgoodpublicspeechskills.Ifinallycameoutofthecontestasthefirstprizewinner.IknowhowIachievedmysuccess.Itcamefromgoodplanningandbetterdoingcombined.【解析】本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目可判断出主要是介绍将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写,不能跑题。提纲部分还要求三个方面:1.简述你对这句名言的理解;2.用一个具体事例加以说明;3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定了作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后,还要注意文章应用第一人称、一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时发挥自己的想象,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来。注意要主次分明、详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁,同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章自然连贯。最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【2015年】(2015·安徽)某英文杂志正在举办以“Fancyyourselfasaninterviewer”为主题的征文活动,请你以“AFamousChineseIWouldLiketoInterview”为题,写一篇英语短文。内容包括:1.采访的对象;2.采访的原因;3.想提的问题。注意:1.词数120左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;4.短文的标题已给出,不计人总词数。AFamousChineseIWouldLiketoInterview________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】学科网(北京)股份有限公司
AFamousChineseIWouldLiketoInterviewThepersonIwouldliketointerviewisYangLiwei.IwouldreallyliketointerviewhimbecauseheisnotonlythefirstChinesetogotospacebutalsooneofthegreatestastronautsintheworld.IhavelongbeeninterestedinspaceexplorationandIbelieveIcouldlearnagreatdealfromhimaboutit.IfIcouldinterviewhim,Iwouldaskhimwhatmadehimanastronautandhowhewastrained.IwouldalsoliketoknowhowhefeltinspaceandwhetherspacetravelissuchgreatfunasIhaveread.Finally,Iwouldliketoaskafewquestionsabouthispersonallife,whichmustbeveryinteresting.【解析】题目是一篇命题材料作文。作文的写作要点已经给出,需要考生根据提示进行写作,作文必须涵盖所有要点,还要注意语篇的连贯性。注意使用高级词汇和定语从句、倒装、强调等重点语法知识。词数在120左右,标题不计入总词数。注意行文的连贯性,不能出现与本人有关的信息。【亮点说明】范文使用了一些重点句型:定语从句IwouldliketointerviewisYangLiwei;原因状语从句becauseheisnotonlythefirstChinese...;宾语从句①Icouldlearnagreatdealfromhimaboutit,②whatmadehimanastronautandhowhewastrained;条件状语从句IfIcouldinterviewhim;非限制性定语从句whichmustbeveryinteresting等,显示了扎实的语法功底,也使作文的句式变得多样;范文还使用了一些固定搭配和固定短语:notonly...butalso...;oneofthe...;thefirsttodosth.;beinterestedin;agreatdeal;such...as等,使作文的内容变得更加丰富;范文注意使用notonly...butalso,and,also和finally等来衔接句子,使范文显得语意连贯、衔接紧凑。【考点定位】命题类材料作文【名师点睛】题目给出了一个征文的通知,要求考生根据提示以“AFamousChineseIWouldLiketoInterview”为题,写一篇英语短文。题目属于命题作文,不过,题目给出了写作的框架,一定程度上降低了难度。需要注意的是,所写的作文必须涵盖所有的要点,如果能够使用高级词汇和重要句型,将会给作文增色不少。(2015·湖南)SectionC(25marks)Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelow.请以老师当众表扬你为话题,用下面所给的句子开头,续写一篇英语短文。Asastudent,Icantellyouthatthereisnothingbetterthanbeingpraisedbymyteacherbeforemyclassmates.注意:1.将所有句子写在答题卡上;2.续写词数不少于120个;3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。【答案】Onepossibleversion:Asastudent,Icantellyouthatthereisnothingbetterthanbeingpraisedbymyteacherbeforemyclassmates.Yesterdayafternoon,LiMingandIwenthometogetherafterschool.Suddenlywesawanoldladyknocked学科网(北京)股份有限公司
downbyacar.Thedriverranawayinhiscar.LiMingandIranovertofindthattheoldlady’sheadwasbleeding.Shehadalreadylostconsciousness.ImmediatelyItookoutmyhandkerchiefandcoveredthewoundwithit.LiMingstoppedataxiquickly.Togetherweputtheoldladyintothetaxianddrovehertothenearesthospital.Theoldladywassavedandwealsofeltverypleased.What’smore,Irememberedthenumberofthecar,andthetrafficpolicecaughtthedriverlater.学科网(北京)股份有限公司