小作文开头段改写诀窍ppt课件.ppt 14页

图表作文开头段的写法开头段的写法：改写/转述题目同义替换1.同义词替换2.关键词词性、位置的转换。3.时间、地点的改写。4.名词和从句之间的相互转换。1 1.同义词替换。（关键词词性、位置的转换。）2 THETABLEBELOWSHOWSTHEPROPORTIONOFDIFFERENTCATEGORIESOFFAMILIESLIVINGINPOVERTYINAUSTRALIAIN1999.FamilytypeProportionofpeoplefromeachhouseholdtypelivinginpovertySingleagedperson6%Agedcouple4%Single,nochildren19%Couple,nochildren7%Soleparent21%Couplewithchildren12%Allhousehold11%3 原题：THETABLEBELOWSHOWSTHEPROPORTIONOFDIFFERENTCATEGORIESOFFAMILIESLIVINGINPOVERTYINAUSTRALIAIN1999.改后：THEFOLLOWINGCHARTDESCRIBESTHEPERCENTAGEOFDIVERSETYPES（同义词替换）OFPOORFAMILIES（改变关键词的位置和词性）INAUSTRALIAIN1999.4 图表作文开头段常用替换1.show:(10种)give,describe,demonstrate,outline,indicate,reveal,present,illustrate,offer/provideanoverviewof…,compare5 2.Information:data,statistics,numbers,figures,3.proportion:percentage,share4.types:kinds,divisions,sorts,categories,aspects,classifications6 2.时间、国家的改写。7 原句：ThegraphbelowshowstheunemploymentratesintheU.S.andJapanbetweenMarch1993andMarch1999.时间改写：betweenMarch1993andMarch1999duringtheperiodfromMarch1993toMarch1999.地点改写（具体概括）intheU.S.andJapan:intwodifferentcountries8 3.名词和从句之间的相互转换9 ThegraphbelowshowstheunemploymentratesintheU.S.andJapanbetweenMarch1993andMarch1999N.howN.+V.(change/fluctuate)unemploymentrateshowunemploymentrateschanged10 总结开头段的写法：改写/转述题目同义替换1.同义词替换2.关键词词性、位置的转换。3.时间、地点的改写。betweenAandBduringtheperiodfromAtoB地点改写（具体概括）4.名词和从句之间的相互转换。N.howN.+V.(change/fluctuate)11 1Thegraphbelowshowstheproportionofthepopulationaged65andoverbetween1940and2040inthreedifferentcountries.练习：12 原题：Thegraphbelowshowstheproportionofthepopulationaged65andoverbetween1940and2040inthreedifferentcountries改写1：ThegivenlinechartcomparesthepercentageofagedpeopleinJapan,SwedenandU.S.A.duringtheperiodfrom1940to2040.改写2：ThemainconcernofthefollowinggraphistopresenthowagedpeoplefluctuateinJapan,SwedenandU.S.A.duringtheperiodfrom1940to2040.练习1：13 此课件下载可自行编辑修改，供参考！感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！