谚语评论性四级英语作文.ppt 29页

2015.12谚语评论类作文 引语评论作文的特点全英文给题，无中文提示。文章给出一句名人名言或是俗语谚语，并且进行评论。文章主题与“人生哲理、优秀品质”相关，不再是以往的校园、学习或社会热点 困惑学生拿到这个没有中文提纲的写作题目之后，无从下手——一不知道文章的段落结构安排，而不知道文章的内容怎么去写。 评论类作文的发展及怎样审题 StepI审题（2011）PartIWriting(30minutes)Directions:You"reallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying,"Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I"vedoneithundredsoftime.”You"dwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.用事例来例证strongwill是成功的关键？ 审题（2012）PartIWriting(30minutes)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTheWaytoSuccessbycommentingonAbrahamLincoln’sfamousremark,“Givemesixhourstochopdownatree,andIwillspendthefirstfoursharpeningtheaxe.”Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutmorethan200words。用林肯的名言中来论证fullpreparation对成功的重要性 TheWaytoSuccessPersistenceandthedeterminationtosuccesscanovercomeprofoundobstacles.TaketheexampleofthefirstwomanSupremeCourtJusticeofUnitedStates.ShegraduatedfromStanfordwiththeprestigeofherdegreedreamedtobelawyerbutshewasrejectedfromtheentirelawcircuit.Evensoshenevergaveup.Intheend,shewaseventuallynominatedandappointedthefirstwomanSupremeCourtJusticeintheUnitedStates. TheWaytoSuccessLet’stakeLinShuhaoforexample.HeisaChinese-Americancitizen.Atthebeginning,hewasnotverypopularinNBA.Whenhefirstappearedinthematch,quiteafewpeopleholdtheviewthathecouldnotsurviveinNBA,letalonebecomeafamousbasketballstar.However,withhardworkandprofounddiligence,heachievedsuccess! TheWaytoSuccessDiligence,hardworkingandpersistencecanhelpustotranscendanyhandicaps.TheexperienceofHelenKellersetanexampleforus.Shewasandisabledpeopleandshewasdeprivedofhearingandvisionwhenshewasborn,butshefinallyacquiredmanylanguagesandbecomeafamouswriterandeducator. TheWaytoSuccessChancefavorstheprepared.LesBrown,aniconinAmericanbroadcasting,couldbeoneofthemostconvincingcasesofhowfullpreparationworksinsuccess.Hewassenttothespecialeducationschoolforthelearningdisabled.Aftergraduation,hebecameagarbagecollector,sothefutureforhimisslim.However,henevergiveup,becausehehadadreamtobecomeaDJ.Hewenttothelocalradiostationandwantedtogetajobthere.(Buttherequestwasrejectedbythemanagerfornoworkexperienceinbroadcasting.Despiteeveryone’sdiscouragementandcriticism,hewasdeterminedandwenttothestationeveryday.Finallythemanagergaveinandtookhimtodosmalltaskatnopay.DuringthetimespentwiththerealDJs,)helearnedbyhimselfhowtooperatethepanel,andaccumulatedtheknowledgetobroadcast.Owingtoit,thechancearrived.Onedayafternoon,aDJfelttoosicktobroadcastandnoonecouldbefoundtotakeoverhim.Atthistime,themanagerassignedLestohaveatry.Becauseofhisfullpreparation,Leasucceeded.HowcouldLesBrownhavedonewithoutfullpreparation? TheWaytoSuccessDiligencePersistenceHardworkingDeterminationWell/fullpreparation 2015年12月第一套Directions:Forthispart,yourareallowed30minutestowriteanessaycommentinginthesaying“Listeningismoreimportantthantalking.”Youcanciteexamplestoillustratetheimportanceofpayingattentiontoothers’opinions.Youshouldwriteat120wordsbutnomorethan180words.自己举例或用理据论证倾听的重要性Twocommunicativeways 2015年12月第二套Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaycommentingonthesaying“Learningisadailyexperienceandalifetimemission.”Youcanciteexamplestoillustratetheimportanceoflifelonglearning.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.用事例（活到老学到老）或理据论证终身学习的重要性It’snevertoooldtolearn来论证学习时终身的 2015年12月第三套Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaycommentingonthesaying“Nevergoouttheretoseewhathappens,goouttheretomakethingshappen.”Youcanciteexamplestoillustratetheimportanceofbeingparticipantsratherthanmereonlookersinlife.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.用事例（扶不扶老人、帮助贫困生或特殊儿童）或理据论证主动成为参与人，贡献我们的才能，造福大众的重要性 Howtoorganize?1.直接引用引语文章的第1和2句，引用题中给予的原话Thereisawidespreadsayingthat,“…”（2.简化引语+表层评论改写引语使之简洁易懂对引语的表层含义进行评论；就引语的“事”说“事”）3.提炼挖掘引语的深层含义Thesaying/proverb/sb’sremarkaimsatinformingusofthesignificanceofA(提出A的重要性)Paragraphone: Howtoorganize?事例法：举自己的故事:(1.父母怎样由criticize到listening的变化。由此带来的与父母关系的改善，和自己学习成绩的提高。2.与好朋友之间的相处或关系的改善等)例举身边发生的故事，故事能够体现倾听的重要性的ParagraphTwo2015年12月第一套试卷Writing Howtoorganize?例举论证法：1.正反面论述法：正面论述倾听的重要性反面论述如果没有倾听会有什么样的后果2.例举罗列法：itcan…itcan…anditcan…ParagraphTwo 正反论述Ifirmlybelievethatlisteningisofgreatersignificancethantalking.Foronething,Ifyoucannotlistencorrectly,youcannottalkproperly.Justimagineaworldwhereeveryonekeeptalkingbutnobodylistening,it"suselesstosayanythingthen.Foranother,ifyouwanttomakeachievementinsocialsettings,relationshipsandbusiness,onewaytoensureyoursuccessistobeagreatlistener. 理据罗列Asweallknow,listeningisagoodwayincommunicationwithothers.Becauseithelpsustounderstandtheideasofothersclearly,avoidingmisunderstanding;ithelpsuswidenourhorizon;andithelpsusbuildupagoodrelationshipwithothers. Howtoorganize?事例法：例举自己身边的例子：如你爷爷或奶奶学会用网上购物，微信视频聊天，开微博当博主等你周围的邻居40多岁了考上了大学等名人事例：86岁的著名经济学家于光远学会使用电脑，建微博。海伦.凯特的励志故事ParagraphTwo2015年12月第二套试卷Writing Howtoorganize?例举论证法：1.正反面论述法：正面论述倾听的重要性反面论述如果没有倾听会有什么样的后果2.例举罗列法：itcan…itcan…anditcan…ParagraphTwo 正反论述Asweallknow,theknowledgechangessoquicklywiththeadvanceofmodernsociety,thosewhodon’tusethemobileInternettechnologywillfallbehindthetimes.Forexample,youcan’tuseamobilephonetobookataxi,payvariousfees,buyallkindsofgoodsetc.Whilethosewhomaintainthehabitoflifelonglearningwillbenefitfromthenewtechnologies. Therefore,inordertoenhanceourconversationskills,hereareafewsimpleruleswecanfollowtohelpusbecomeabetterlistener,suchasstoppingtalkingendlessly,givingyourfullattentiontothespeakerandmakinganefforttoshiftthefocusoftheconversationtotheotherperson.Allinall,nothingcaninsteadoflistening! PartIITranslation 云南省的丽江古镇是中国著名的旅游目地之一。古镇：旅游目的地：云南省的丽江古镇:Lijiang,theancienttowninYunnanProvince,isoneofthefamoustraveldestinationinChina.TheancienttownofLijianginYunanProvinceisoneofthefamoustraveldestinationinChina.ancienttown;oldtowntourist/traveldestinationTheancienttowninYunnanProvince 那里的生活节奏比大多数中国城市都要缓慢。Wrong:ThepaceoflifethereisslowerthanmostothercitiesinChina./mostotherChinesecities.Right:ThepaceoflifethereisslowerthanthepaceoflifeinmostotherChinesecities.that 丽江到处都是美丽的自然风光，众多少数名族同胞提供了各式各样、丰富多彩的文化让游客体验。自然风光：naturalscenery;naturallandscape少数民族同胞：minoritypeople各式各样:various丰富多彩：colorfulLijianghasbeautifulnaturalscenerieseverywhere.Theminoritypeopleprovidevariousandcolorfulculturefortourists.Therearebeautifulnaturalscenerieseverywhere.Theminoritypeopleprovidevariousandcolorfulculturefortourists. 历史上，丽江还以“爱之城”而闻名。当地人流传着许多关于因爱而生、为爱而死的故事。流传：spread当地人：localpeople因爱而生，为爱而死的故事：live-or-die-for-lovestoriesInhistory,Lijiangwasalsoknownas“thecityoflove”,wheremanylive-or-die-forstoriesarewidelyspreadamongthelocals. 如今，在中外游客的眼中，这个古镇被视为爱情和浪漫的天堂。Nowadays,thisancienttownisregardedasaparadiseforloveandromancebytouristsbothathomeandabroad.